This is the best Charmed story i've read. Thank you for writing hope to read more soon.

lol... i LOVED this chapter! my favorite part was when Pheobe starts embarrassing them both! this is probably one of my favorite chapters! i cant wait to see Chi confront Becca about Chris... i think that when Becca explains everything to her, Chi will be understanding and support her... if shes really like a sis to her shed understand... and trust Becca's decision... unless she thinks tuat Chris is a really bad guy... well, anyway, great chapter! cant wait for the next one!!
-BlackRose

Very nice job, Can't wait to see what Chi is going to say to her. I am glad that the sisters know that Becca & Chris are together it makes it measier to deal with.

Alright! I love how fast you respond when I say "what's up". More Chris and Becca goodness and I'm looking forward to the next chapter as well. Yes I think the "three's company" thing with Chi will be akward at first but it'll be ok. Do you know what "three's company" was? I feel old now. I hope that when you do the make a baby Chris part of the show that you think about giving him some Elder powers. I mean he became part Elder right not just half whitelighter so shouldn't he get stronger? Anyway thanks again for the personal response. I love those and I am looking forward to reading about the childhoods. Keep up the great work.

The last scene with Chris and Becca reminds me of a book called Shiver by Maggie Stiefvater. It's a totally awesome book! :)
Excellent chapter, Chi and Becca reuniting was sweet and I LOVE the scene where Piper and Phoebe catch Chris and Becca kissing, and its aftermath was so totally funny. :D LOL!
Really lookin forward to the next update, hope its very soon. :)

Ok it's time for an update. Come on just a small one. Ten little pages is all I ask. Please!

Totally awesome, love the fight scene. Go Chris and Becca! The last scene reminded me of a book that I just read. Loved it. Really lookin forward to the next and what happens with Chi and Tim. Hope you update very very soon. :)

chris denfinately has the qualites to be a great father... i loved this chap so very much and i horribly happy that Becca kicks Curtis's a**... i never liked him... my favorite part was whrn Chris tells Becca its her choice of where Chris sleeps... its soo sweet!! lol... hmm... i denfinately will push a little more then... i cant wait for the next chap and im soo happy i got a chance to read this! ill reply to you email tomorrow... i have to get to sleep...
-BlackRose

Very nice job. I am glad that Curtis got what he deserved.

Thank you! I was going to give you till the end of the week then yell at you to update but you've been good so again thank you. This was another great chapter. Hearing a little about Chris growing up was nice and how you handle him and his family stuff is really great. I've been hoping Curtis would get his butt kicked soon and this did not let me down. What I like the most is that Becca and Chris really feel like they are experianced at what they do and are not begging the COs to save them. That kinda made me not like the show sometimes. I mean I know the show was about them but it felt like every one was useless including elders and all other beings who have kept the world safe for hunderds of years. Anyway will the forbiden aspect of witches and whitelighters be a factor cause Leo would have issuses with it, and everything else involving Chris. Will Becca ask Chris what it was like growing up with Wyatt,Leo and the COs? I am interested in your take on his childhood. Keep up the great work!

yeah, her reaction was expected! i loved this chapter! i thought it was great when Chris thought Becca would make a great mother! and i cant wait to see how Becca brings up the thing with only one bed... it should be quite interesting! and i also liked how Becca thought Chris would maje a great father... very good! keep it up! hm... maybe ill have to start pushing you to update sooner! lol...
-BlackRose

You are very welcome. I never get a personal response to a review before and now I have two from two different authors so that's cool. I really liked this chapter a lot. The relationship between Chris and Becca is one of the things I like most about this story so any chapter about them is welcome. I hope you continue to do your own story ideas like this chapter and the japan story arc instead of heavy rewrites of episodes from the show. Rewrites are alright sometimes but I still would like something new on a normal basis. Thanks for the update and if I see you dragging your feet I'll soot over an email to say what's up. I wish you good luck everything you might be struggling with and hope it all works out alright.

Awesome and totally cute chapter. I love how they both thought the other was going to make a great parent oneday. Little Wyatt is so cute! I think one of my favorite scenes in Charmed is the scene of Chris playing with little Wyatt in Hyde School Reunion. Hope you update soon. :)

very good job, I like how Wyatt and Becca responsed to each other. The scene with them sleeping and Chris coming in was cute. Hope everything in your personal life gets better, sorry you had to deal with a death, it's never a good time to have to do that.

Ok it's been a while and no update. I'm asking very nice PLEASE UPDATE! This is a cool and original story so please update soon. Thanks!