Reviews for Clarity, Her Tomb

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Suifox 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseWhen is the next update?
Egg 2008-05-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou write insanity in a way that gives me chills. I'm actually scared. Bookmarking this for a reference.
Tatsumaki-sama 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseAnother creepy but incredible story! I was feeling shivers running down my back the whole time while Leo slipped from his dreams to the real world until the point I was as confused as Leo which one was real and which one was a dream. I don't know why but the ending bit with "Don" telling Leo to stay for dinner really unnerved me. The normality of "Don" mentioning something as simple as dinner when Leo was stuck, more like trapped, in that world just weirded me out for some reason. I really hope that you update this soon. Please? Pretty please?
make love not toast 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseThis is really impressive, It takes a lot of talent to pull off this type of story. Please keep writing.
rogueandkurt 2008-02-02 ch 1,	abusePlease oh please update this and 'The Butcher and Baker and Candlestick Maker'! They're both so utterly unique and they mess with my mind in an amazing way. I would absolutely love to read more of both of them! Please do continue! Keep Smiling! ;) rogueandkurt
MikeyPhreak 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abuseGood god! That was a Prologue?! Wow. Good stuff, though. I was rivetted to my seat. Kind of hard to seperate the dreams from reality, though (or mabye that's just my own tired mind not reading it right?). I must say, I look forward to subsequent chapters. I can say that I'm not Leo's biggest fan, and haven't found a Leocentric that has been able to keep my attention, but you've managed it. Great job. Update soon!
stace 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon.	abusehey good story but i dont get it. it totally confused me though so can you please explain what that was about and can you please write more stories i really like reading them Was the story supposed to confuse people?
a-big-apple 2007-12-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is fascinating! I've just discovered your fanfiction tonight, and it's incredibly satisfying so far--your prose is so smooth, and your command of the characters is just amazing. I've read them straight through until I hit this one, when I decided I should leave you a review to let you know that I'm really enjoying your stuff, and that this fic is an excellent go at the horror genre (just the kind of thriller I like!). I hope you continue with it, I'm completely hooked. I love the disoriented feeling I have right now just from reading it.
Merdeka21 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseI'm so confused! And intrigued xD
Seizalyn 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseI can't... I don't... I don't understand a bloody farking thing. And it. Is. AWESOME! OMG. OMG OMG OMG. How do you write such wonderful pieces? HOW?! This is amazing, you do "creepy" all the justice that adjective deserves. It's so scary, I think I'm gonna need to hunt down a fluffy turtle-tot fic just to wipe the chill from my bones. It's terrible and horrible and wonderfully, wonderfully fantastic and I cannot tell you how I'm loving this dark, dark take on Wonderland. I'm imagining American McGee starring Leonardo now. AND WHY IS DON SO SCARY? AH. I can't decide which to beg for-- more Lockdown, more this, more Butcher...? Yet another fave, yet another story alert for you. XD FAVES
Artsy Resuri 2007-09-15 ch 1,	abuseMan, that openeing scene just floors me every time I read it. That, without a doubt, is the BEST portrayal of terror I've ever read. My favourite sentence was when Leo was trying to back up further, and his feet kept slipping because there was no where left for him to go. Such a great detail; I can see myself doing something like that. Haha, so there's this one as well as Lockdown that I can't wait to see updated. Torture!
B.U.G.I.M.S 2007-09-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was the PROLOGUE?! Oh my non-gender-specific deity! That- agh! What the poop?! THat was so- so- mind screwy! And- awesome! I can't even tell what's really happening. Which means, obviously, that you're doing your job. This story left 'Wonderland' behind a long time ago. 'Wonderland' seems like a perfectly ordered and logical place when compared to this. I love it. I always get a kick out of stories where reality is subjective, and you write that really well. Dream and actuality becoming interchangable, with a little insanity and delusion thrown in. Perfect. I really hope to see more of this from you. Keep being awesome :D
Nekotsuki 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abuseAha! You're not the only one that needs to catch up on reviews! XD But seriously ... wow. When I first read this, I read that very first section (Close to the ending) and went OH MY GOD. Terrified, near hysterical Leo is a rare thing indeed, and it's not only faintly heartbreaking (and wrenching) but I was left wanting to know SO badly how he'd gotten to that point. (Which is, of course, a really awesome way of starting a story. XD) Not only that, but we have twisted!Don, and an obviously badly hurt Leo, and ... "Cut your left eye out last."? GAH. I want the rest now! So that is a brilliant way of pulling in your audience. :D And after that part, Close to the Beginning set off all sorts of warning bells. Your subtitles all the way through make the entire read creepy as HELL (in an awesome way, of course), and the odd ins and outs of Leo's waking/sleeping day make me think you're a master of horror/suspense and I envy you very much. You're a fantastic writer. Don't ever think otherwise! "Oh honey, you're in for a treat" ... oh yes, I wonder what the hell is going on; whether Leo's just gone insane from insomnia or there's some horribly twisted-yet-plausible explanation for what's going down. Much love for all your stories. :3 I am so glad you're a TMNT fan. (...and a Leo fan. But I'm trying to be objective here ...cough)
PrettyArbitrary 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abuseCreepy as hell. I definitely hope to see more of this!
LadyLeo 2007-08-01 ch 1, anon.	abuse...?? As always, intriguing and leaving me hungry for more. You write so well...and now I'm completely confused. That's a good thing, it's a scary confused--you aren't giving yourself enough credit with the whole horror writing thing. Please update soon...and all your other stories, too!

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