|Reviews for While You Were Sleeping|
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 1
I cried. This is beautiful :')
| Cassandra30 9/7/10 . chapter 1
So sweet and beautiful!
| lyux 2/19/09 . chapter 1
bittersweet, in a way (:
| MusicalLife17 12/10/08 . chapter 1
that was so beautiful..i have tears falling down my cheeks as im typing...loved it
| blklover 11/9/08 . chapter 1
great story write more update soon
| sick-atxxheart 9/20/08 . chapter 1
That was good, very nicely done.
| zule bean 4/4/08 . chapter 1
This is a really great story. You should fix up the few spelling mistakes to make it perfect!
| Gin's Comettail 3/25/08 . chapter 1
Aw... the only thing that tripped me up was the bit about 'the rules' since surely every person ever who died would feel the same way, and wouldn't that make Teddy less exceptional? But as always you are dead-on in hitting the perfect emotional tone :-)
| Tina101 3/19/08 . chapter 1
Oh wow, super sweet story. That ending really got to me the most.
| Twinkie 12/15/07 . chapter 1
That almost made me cry, it was so sadly sweet.
| Fmh 12/9/07 . chapter 1
Very sad but a good story thank you
| Floatey948 11/11/07 . chapter 1
You're making me cry! That was amazing, so sweet! I absolutely loved it!
| anagl 11/4/07 . chapter 1
that was beautifull!..OMG i'm crying like a baby! gorgeous!
| Rosebud811 10/21/07 . chapter 1
Impressive. You brought me to tears. Great one-shot.
| mimosa 8/30/07 . chapter 1
Rules of the dead? Interesting insight.