Great story! I'll continue with the next one immediately. Can't wait to "dive in". Thank you for writing this, and all of your other stories, too. Please continue with your writing, you're GOOD.

KUTGW,

Noreen

Orion Black AKA Harry Potter. Come on, it's obvious! Ori's hearing the basilisk, he has a lightning shaped scar (which DOES hurt him from time to time), and he has green eyes! Ori can't remember anything from before he was 5 because he must have been put under a memory charm. It's obvious!

I had some free time and decided to reread this story. I have to confess, at the time that you were writing and posting I was kind of swamped with work so I had to read most of the chapters quickly and as a consequence I didn't remember most of it.
Today I gave myself the pleasure of rereading, and knowing now what happened when Orion was adopted made for a very different read as I could catch all of your subtle hints.
As usual I was awed by your ability not only to write but to plan ahead so much in advance and I just had to compliment your great work!
Awaiting eagerly for more of Goblet of Fire and for when James and Lily realize Orion knows!

I can just imagine that Orion is going to have nightmares for weeks. And he won't be comforted without actually seeing Sirius.

This was a really good fic, and it's interesting how you're doing things. I still want to know what the hell Orion's form is

You know, it'd be interesting to petrify him in this and switch views to Hayden. I could see complications with it, but it would be interesting.

You'd think he'd have noticed that the ink disappeared

hm... wonder how this is going to go now

I can't see no one getting expelled after this, either Lockhart or Malfoy are going to get the boot (or at least they should)

So now he knows the voice comes from a snake. That's good, I thought he'd be smart enough to put that bit together. Nice job

He should be able to figure out it's a snake long before Harry does in canon

*sigh*, they could just forgive each other. Even if they never get chummy chummy again they would be able to let go of the anger and hurt

Why was Hayden given detention when he didn't do anything?

Pretty awesome.

why do i get the feeling that rose and ori will date...WAIT!...that is just wrong...considring the fact that i think hayden and ori are twins which makes rose orian's sister which is why they have alot in commen
sorry for going on and on...and on
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love your awsome talent (which is writing)
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