Very well written... I love it. :) Thank you for taking the time to post!

It was absolutely captivating to me. I wish there was somthing to tell you if he made it back from the war or how they met in those time. I really did enjoy this. Thank you so much for posting this I really did love reading it.

wow.
O.o
that was good.

Alright! This is one of my favorite AU Nejiten oneshots now. XD Great job! Nejiten forever!

i love it

I loved this piece very much. Well-written and just simply done awesome!

wow...this is a lovely AU fic, and now i want to read more of them!!
I love your style of writing and how fluidly the story's told

Sweet

that was great!! i lov ethe imagery... i could picture everything! amazingly good... byby~yu~

LOVE it! Total AWESOMENESS!

~Dreaming101

wow...i like this fic a lot!

This was very enjoyable to read. =)

i love it.
i love it.
i love it.

you're a really great writer[:
great joB!

well, I liked it!
^^
really cute, and beautifull
great story
:3

SQUE! OMFG *dies of fluff* so cute! I love how Tenten crossdressing and ZOMG CAPTAIN HYUUGA! And the making out in the dark scene was hot too! There can never be enough AU Nejitens so please write more, maybe a prequel to this or something.