O, I like this a lot. XD I love that line: "Sanity left her in wisps of un-cried tears, death was at her doorstep, taunting her day in and day out."

Just one thing that kinda bugged me...the line: "Stripped of soul, robbed of joy, nobody would reassure anymore, for there was no comprehension in her empty hazel eyes." It just sounded too...long...and not quite right. Perhaps if you made "robbed of joy" the end of a sentence and then made "nobody" the beginning of a new one? Sorry, I'm a tad bit insane to go on for so long about one sentence. :P

Other than that, though, I loved it. Always a definite possibility of craziness in everyone, right? XD

-ckontowderdon32

Wow, Nikki! This was REALLY good. You DESERVE a OA. Great job!!

Eve

Dark. Really dark. *grins* I like dark. Don't take me as an emo or something, I just... like dark. *grins*

Oh, wow... This was very deep! You've outdone yourself this time! That was brilliant!

Congrats for this amazing vignette =)
See you!

OMG I loved this SO much! Why didn't you show me before?? I think its the best thing you've written so far!! ROCKIN!

Oh, I'm chilled. That was good. You know I'll always be the first one to review. :D Holly's angst inspiartion comes from the images I think of her. You captured that image. This gave me inspration for a poem, though sometimes it sounds like a song almost.

Beautiful,
Shannon