Great Story, one's got to love it and the slightly different Lois and Clark.
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Funny, smart and well written- I liked it very much :) Good job!

THIS WAS AWESOME! I loved it and the whole part with Claude was inspired.

Ok, total surprise. I thought it would be clark to the rescue.

Uh oh, I hope the cops let Clark go check on something he "forgot."

“Let me tell you this: I love you. I know it’s so wrong and I regret the burden I’m transferring to you. I regret that, Lois, but I could never bring myself to regret the love in my heart. It’s shameful and vile, but please believe me when I say it’s sincere. I want you to forget me, but please keep the words in your heart and know that they were heartfelt. Let them comfort you when you’re sad. And when you find someone your own age who you can love back, remember them one last time and then forget. Forget me, Lois.”


OMG this is breaking my heart.

“—Don’t. Don’t Lois. Call me Mr. Kent. Please, for my sanity. It’s time for you to go home. Be sure to tell your parents what happened to you tonight. Go to the doctor tomorrow.” Clark paused and his voice nearly cracked on the last bit. “Do your homework. I’ll see you tomorrow"

Poor clark, I love the teacher mode though, do your homework.

First she hung around Lexy and Jill, the scourge of Metropolis High School and now she was seeing some greasy Frenchman?

LOL, not to mention Lois Lane's life IS better than DOOL. I think this chapter has now offically made this story one of my favs.

amazing job as usual. You do a wonderful job with the personalities of Lois and Clark and their relationship. I have loved every story you have written, keep them coming!

Awesome story, I was sure that I would miss the last few chapters, but here they came... Must say that you do some great writing and I love the way you handle each person the way you bring them to life, keep it up... Looking forward to your next one.

Have a great Holiday,

Jack

Two beautifully written chapters.

Your descriptions paint vivid pictures in my mind. The story is progressing so nicely and the characters are kept in great character. Sometimes I question though if Lois would fall for Clark so quickly though...considering that in the series she didn't feel for Clark in /that/ way. But then...I suppose she had Superman to be distracted with ^^;

Your writing is a pleasant treat. Keep up the brillance.

Another wonderful chapter.

Lucy and Lois are really cute in this chapter and I enjoyed reading their conversation. Clark is very well kept in character as well I think, and reading his thoughts was insightful.

Your writing displays intelligence and creativity. Simply splendid.

Aw...Clark is so cute xD

I didn't mention before how I really liked the including of Claude, I think you worked him in beautifully into your story.

Your writing is superb, and a terrible pleasure to read. Hoping to expect the same wonderful work!

Mm...Clark a widow? That's terribly sad...
Normally I'm not one to go for those kind of stories...especially if it has Lana in it Dx Smallville made me despies her >>;;

But I really enjoy your writing and I do think you keep Lois Lane in perfect character. This story is fun to read, keep up the wonderful work!

Generally...I like it =D

Mm...the only things I thought that could be improved is separating the breaks in the story. Like...putting a line in there or something to show a change of scene. That and just...sometimes the tenses change from past to present.

But other than that, I really enjoy this story ^^ Excited to read more.