hey, this was really good! I know you don't know me much but I'm just wond'ring wether we could write Sirius' third adventure together? :D I DO have ideas. You could read my fan fic and decide whether i'm good enough of a writer or not... please if you do read my fan fic then leave a review! (yes, it's 24... but still. it explains everything you've got to know.)

OK, well, I must be annoying with all my reviews since you never answer any of them, and you called me a dog reviewer (wich I unfortunately have no clue of its meaning, but I bet its something offensive- I mean, how often does anyone compare a person to a dog?) but I'll still review this chapter. I accidentally reviewed the fifth chapter, instead of the third to give sign of my enthusisasm for future writings of yours, so now I'll tell my opinion of the final chapter, since you cannot review that twice, in this very review. Wow, I sure repeated reviews many times in this review. O.o Ow gosh - again I did use the term...

So, I think this was good, except for the fact that you hadn't described what happened in the time James and Sirius were waiting for rescuers, and so left your reader with questions - did they talke to Nancy and Cory, and inform them that they were stuck, or did just the two Marauders sense it / see it /here it? So, you could've detailed that more. And you could've written down what was Ginny's & Harry's reaction when they heard of their son's deed. That had be an interesting way to finish the story. It had fascinate me if you'd correct or add more bits to the very last chapter, but I do not want to meddle or anything.

goodbye.

BTW, in my review before I was just kidding. Hope you didn't take me seriously and so thought I was a total idiot. O.o Goshies. Hope you get why and what I was joking with. XD Could you please send me the future chapters to my e-mail adress (it's not public but-) if you decide to send them to me without uploading it here then ask me and you'll most certainly receive it. Nah, what do you say? *.*

Oh, this is my favorite chapter so far. Because of the Quidditch scene... I love Quidditch... and this fic, anyway. XD Really, I don't see why people don't review it, it's really good and it's well-written... Nah, so back to the chapter review... I've got to force myself and point out one single mistake to you.
Jo, you didn't write what was up with Nancy and Cory while James and Sirius were having fun in Hogsmeade with two Uncles and one single Will Weasley.
Overall, a very good chapter... and I want to find out NOW, definately, necessarily, what will happen with the Marauders when they go to the Search for the Green Stone... BTW how did the two uncles KNOW? I mean, they surely didn't sneak in Hogwarts for fun... for the fun of it - nah... O.o
And... yeah, I love ya too >:P

Love,Marietta Black

Please, please update soon! *looks at you with cow eyes* PS.: Sorry for only favoriting now... ^^"

Hi! It's me again lol... so I like this story too... but, khm, I read the seventh book and Dobby died in it, Draco turned his back on the evil side and gone good... I know you wrote it already but still, I thought I should tell. Now, keep up the good work! ^^