 racierfirer0 2009-10-06 . chapter 44haunting, fascinating and oddly bittersweet...its definitely a great story but i can't help wistfully wanting harry and draco to still stay at their old world :) anyhow, a satisfying read, as usual!! :D |
 Veronica 2009-08-12 . chapter 44 Wow! It has been a really incredible and wondrous voyage! I think there are not one thing which could make this fic better than it is already. Not one. Your plot is awesome and totally enthralling. I really could see how the Wizarding World could go down in the way you pictured in your fic. How easily people could to band together to give an outlet to their grievances from the war and selfishly open the way to another. So disheartening that! It was good you wrote such magnificent and endearing H/D relationship to balance the drama. Even if such relationship was not lacking of its own drama bits too! All that issues of Draco´s apathy and self-imposed isolation, i.e. Or your sneaky showing of Harry/Ginny failed marriage through Ginny trusting her happiness to other instead of her taking charge of it as an real adult and Harry willingly becoming a human doormat! I loved the psychology in it all. Your Draco and Harry are most compelling and it has been a real delight to go along them in their travel of self-discovery. I feel so very sad for the other Harry! And the other Draco, too! Other-Harry´s cowardice affected so many more than himself! I remember Draco and Harry looking into the mirror from their new universe and seeing Other-Draco´s desolation to be abandoned by his Harry and feel like cry or bumping Other-Harry hard on his silly head. To have what he had with Draco and letting it go with nary a fight? And for why? To go back with someone who manipulates him for her own ends and does not value his life enough? I expected more from the hero of the Wizarding World! But above it all, I expected more from someone who finally had really selfless love in his grasp. How someone get THAT and then let it go? Other-Harry was a real pitiful fellow, was him not? *Sigh* I was seriously sad reading about that all but then you wrote Harry and Draco living together and happy in their new universe and it made me happy me again. I loved the way in which you weaved and built their relationship, the way in which the life-debts worked to bring them together, and how their friendship was the first step to them becoming a couple even if passion was there already, shimmering under the surface. I always thought that a fleeting feeling to base on a relationship and was glad to see the boys slow-building their path to love. Also, Harry and Draco as friends is a real pet of mine! You gave me that and I enjoyed their long voyage into new lives lots. It was most captivating and enjoyable! All that magic theory (life-debts, marriage vows, the awakening of Malfoy ancestors, etc) was incredible to me to submerse into, too. And I specially enjoyed the scenes with the children (I dig kidfic as crazy!). Scorpius and Al befriending each other! And their first meeting! All that hand-holding! *squees and fangirls the boys as a possesed* Yes, I dig Al/Scorp too! Anyway, this story was a splendid reading which captured me with superb plot, endearing relationship, and fascinating growing-up which satisfactorily evolved into someone standing for himself and reclaiming a bit of personal happiness instead always favoring others'. I think you wrote a masterful Harry here! And your Ginny was incredible too! You paced her transformation (or should I say revealing?) from happy wife and mother to spoiled princess perfectly. And Hermione becoming a harder individual was sad to see but very well done, too! You brought a bunch of characters into existence who was absolutely fascinating to read about. not james, though. I really feared he become Dudley the Second and I wanted to spank the little bully really hard. I think Harry and Ginny should have disciplined him more seriously. No, I am not advocating for physical punishment at all. Seeing as I was spanked in my childhood myself I found that way of discipline often bred resentment and very little true wanting of see my own childish wrongs. But only saying James he should not to do something without Harry AND Ginny backing their words with actions intended to make the boy to understand why what he did was bad and intolerable clearly was not enough. I was glad he turned well at the end, however. And I loved Lily becoming such little lady a via Narcissa´s influence and mothering! She will become a force to be reckoned for sure. Thank you so much for write this story. I had a great time reading it. I really like your mature writting and your insightful ways when portraying your characters. I enjoy character-study tons! And now I am running to read more of your fics. Bye! |
 Professor Potter-Malfoy 2009-08-12 . chapter 44A brilliant fic! I love the whole mirror/supernatual thing! |
 smiles.lie 2009-07-01 . chapter 44again ur writing proved to me that if i want to read some quality i have to read ur story. i absolutely loved that fic. need to go and check out ur profile now so mb i will find some more amazing new things i missed somehow recently. i think its cause i dnt have u in my author alter on this account. anyway ur added now so im waiting for next stories, chapters everything ah. |
 Imadethistoreview 2009-06-06 . chapter 44Bloody awesome, I don't know how you do it but it's the best. |
 yue no rei 2009-06-01 . chapter 44Wow... I can really see why you named the story as it is. I find it very fitting now that I finished the story, as usual, taking my time. The ending was amazing really, it left a bitter taste when the worlds just truly split and it was rather painful to read about the "real but not real anymore" Harry reconciling with Ginny but it really did banish whatever uneasiness I had about the new reality. The ending was more closer to perfection than I dared to hope and I could see of course there would have to be imperfection in the new world, I loved the distinctions between the two. The journey along this fic was completely different to any of my imaginings when I first read the summary. |
 pogogal18 2009-05-03 . chapter 16 this is a masterpiece I have always been on the hunt for a fanfiction where there is an element of harry and ginny having a sour stale no passion marriage and where harry finds excitement with draco instead and you have crafted the story so brilliantly making this deep bond between harry and draco that no one not even harry's wife can break- and then u have their kids in the story too i cant wait to read more about scorpius and albus bonding that is too cute
keep up the work miss author! u would give rowling a run for her money also i loved your metamorphus fanfic too great fun!! |
 Lanetha Mercion 2009-03-09 . chapter 44i liked it. My favorite part was the Julia Malfoy and how Lily's goal is probably world domination. |
 TheBoltShapedScar 2009-03-08 . chapter 41I would never have guessed, but it is a far betetr solution than I had dared hoping for |
 TheBoltShapedScar 2009-03-08 . chapter 40I'm looking forward to see how the magic will be able to do that |
 TheBoltShapedScar 2009-03-08 . chapter 39Well done Cissy |
 TheBoltShapedScar 2009-03-08 . chapter 36NO! Not her, please, let her be under imperius, anything! Just... Not her, not somebody Harry loves and trusts. It just doesn't make any sense? What can she gain from it? |
 TheBoltShapedScar 2009-03-06 . chapter 32Oh no! Teddy is such a good boy and he was just starting to hear about his parents and even though Andromeda was grieving, that doesn't mean she couldn't have gone on with her life, caring for Teddy |
 TheBoltShapedScar 2009-03-05 . chapter 31I'm very relieved that 'Mione and Ron supports Harry. Who would've guessed Ron could be so understanding? |
 TheBoltShapedScar 2009-03-05 . chapter 30They can work around the marriage vows, yay! XD The sex was very well-written and the ending was beautiful |