this story is really cool. I can't wait to see what happens next but i can help but doubt if raito has really had such a sudden change of heart...

PLEASE WRITE MORE

WOW!!~ KEEP IT UP!

Got me hooked!
I miss Raito in the beginning. Now that the Kira side of him has taken over... he makes me tremble in fear. And how dares he cheat of Lawliet? >:| L'll kick his **.

This is great! I really hate Mikami and Raito for **, but then again I don't...It's kinda weird..Oh well! Please update soon...I really want to read more!

bwahahaha! take that mikami! lxlight is back! ... ... or is it?

please continue ne? ..you have a yaoi obsessed fangirl pleading on her excessivly large knees! i beg of you! this plot is so good! except mikami...ew.

ah!! please tell me the raitoxmikami pairing will end soon? why raito why! ( falls out of chair) must... have... lxlight... ...

please continue..ne?

no! give raito back! why kira why?! the fangirls need the lxlight! heh heh..please continue story..ne?

well..considering there are three more chapters and all and i don't know if you've written whether or not lemon was to be added.. IT'S STILL AN AMAZING STORY! I WOULD REALLY LIKE IT IF THIS STORY WAS CONTINUED! AND IF IM NOT ENOUGH.. IVE GOT PLENTY OF OTHERS WHO WILL GLADLY READ YOUR STORY TOO!! it's true. we lxlight fangirls must unite to get the lemon we desire... (evil laugh) erm... ... ... please consider?

ryuk's kinda oc in this chapter..i like it. does the lemon juice thing actually work?

*thumbs up* ;D!

awsome!

i like it but i hope L or light don't die

Kiyoko Usagi,

Ahh the thought of only two more chapters makes me very sad! I LOVE this story! You can't end it! It's just getting so good! I am dying to read the next chapter but dreading it as well as I think of it as one of the last chapters. I dislike Raito now, and I feel bad for both L and Mikami. Ah this can't end yet! I must keep reading, so please continue writing as much as you can!

-xgreenxgirl

Wow...well theirs a story im not going to be reading the rest of. I wish their was a warning about the multiple parings...this fic would have been great if that scene with Makami and Raito was not added. Well anyway it was real good up to this chapter.