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| Carrro 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI've never been a real Speed/Calleigh shipper, but i have always been able to imagine them together. This fiction made me, however, understand why so many others love to see them as a couple. And you made me believe in it a bit more. It was wonderful to read her memories, and the last part was just heartbreaking. Calleigh was so human, and you managed to catch and write down those things that might seem unimportant to those who haven't lost anyone, but to those who have, it makes the great difference. I am very impressed, and i can't do more than tell you that you made a wonderful work! A lovely and heartbreaking fiction at the same time. ~Carro |
| randomwriting 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story, very moving and beautifully written. I loved the opening paragraph, it grabbed me right from the start and pulled me into the mood of the story. Wondeful capture of Calleigh. I really enjoyed 'seeing' their relationship evolve through her eyes and being privy to her memories. The ending, though, that's what tugged on my heart and put me in her shoes. 'But one thing had kept her from finding peace.' You brought her emotional struggle to life, and did so in a very touching and realistic way. I loved it. |
| disneyrulz23 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseman this was a good heartbreaking story that i read but it was awesome i love it |
| calleighsthebest 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! heartbreaking but awesome! I loved it! |
| speedfanatic05 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseZelda! This was achingly heartbreaking! I can't help but read, bc this is my fave ship of all time, but, dang if it didn't make me cry! The memories were awesome, the sorrow, palable, and my god, the regret about not remembering if she said goodbye...I was simply speechless. You have them both spot on in characterization, and...I'm just really speechless. Excellent work! And it goes into my faves :) |
| csimiamifreako 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, it was a very good story, but sad at the same time, which i guess is a good thing for you cause thats what you were going for, i think. I miss Tim *tears rolling down face* TALLIEGH FOREVER |