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| Hips 2008-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseI really loved this story. I wish we got to see more personal moments like this on the actual show. You have a great way with dialog, I thought their conversation with believable and very guy like. Great job! |
| mabelreid 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI wish we could see more friendship moments with Flack and Danny. That would have been brutal to find out the guy you like and the guy that killed your friends had the same first name. Talk about messing with your head. Great job! |
| ReJo 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is yet *another* great story. This reminded me of the scene when Flack and Danny were in a bar shooting pool and discussing Mac's hearing. It showed them as friends, but discussing something that was somewhat work-related. I really hope TPTB write more scenes like that. They don't always have to be crouched over a dead body or doing analyzing evidence in the lab. This is funny (you know that I always find a funny line): “I’ll tell ya something, buddy. There’s a few guys back at the house who’d love to be in your shoes.” “Well, tell ‘em to find a hobby.” |
| GRACE5 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuseloved it! |