|Reviews for Demonic Nemesis|
| Once Upon An Oddity 6/14/10 . chapter 20
これは素晴らしいです！あなたが警戒して1811多くの人々がありますか？！もちろん、この話が行われてどれだけと期待のようなものです。あなたはとてもうまくそれを説明する！ "次の章では、全く新しい前に、まず見たことがない章されます！"笑！私はそれを使用できますか？とにかく、この章では、驚くばかりである。私はカカシの反応はするのだろうか。そして、何をNARUTO - ナルト - の空白論文では、意味ですか？何が本稿では、ずたずたに分割splitingはどういう意味？私は崖のハンガーが大嫌い！まだ彼らは物事がとても面白いこと！
this is awesome! you have 1811 many people on alert? of course, that's sort of expected with how well this story is done. You just explain it so well! "The next chapter will be the first completely new and never before seen chapter!" LOL! can I use that? Anyway, this chapter is awesome. I wonder what kakashi's reaction will be. And what does naruto's blank paper mean? What does the paper spliting up into shreds mean? I HATE CLIFF HANGERS! yet they make things so intersting!
sorry about the japnese...I've been a little crazed lately...
| alex 6/13/10 . chapter 20
awesome chappie awesome story awesomeness all around please update i wanna see what happens with kira and kakashi
| No- I'm not on facebook 6/13/10 . chapter 20
Awesome chapter followed by a despicable cliffhanger! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
| HikariNoTenshi-San 6/13/10 . chapter 20
T-T DAMMIT! Why can't Naruto just keep friends? Why are you so so cruel, world? Why! UPDATE!
| The Soul of A Warrior 6/13/10 . chapter 19
Well this is an interesting turn of events, this has never been done before what your doing... Cursed seals BEFORE the exams, Naruto also receiving one but it actually gives more benefits then curses... This is an interesting story. A lot of explanations and in-depth speeches, which to be honest, sometimes bores me, but I see the need to explain things thoroughly... Good chapter and character development.
| Guest 6/13/10 . chapter 19
Great chapter, I liked the idea of giving an in-depth explanation for the curse seal. Moving on to the next chapter now.
| DrendeSalkash 6/13/10 . chapter 20
wow. its sad that i can rememer all this stuff happened, but only AFTER i've read it all over again! anyways, great chapter and i cant wait until the new stuff starts
| firelordeg 6/12/10 . chapter 20
i had actually forgotten about thees two chapter being posted before so im glad that im rereading what your posting rather than just waiting for the new stuff and ignoring what you added to the old thank you for sharing this fantastic story please continue to update a.s.a.l.a. as for the vote i voted for chimera but i only want it to be a mix of kitsune and phoenix (i.e. a winged fox)
| Akakinzoku 6/12/10 . chapter 20
a truly badass fic. kinda glad i got around to it this late though, im depressed that i have to wait, ah well thanks for the story. I look forward to your update, later!
| Dragon and Sword Master 6/12/10 . chapter 20
I just review the current chapter if you post more than one, but I was annoyed when you canceled the first story there, but hopefully we will see what will happen to Kira and the others as the story goes on from here.
Keep up the good work and as always, an open mind leads to crazy story ideas like these!
| Zeromaru Chaos Mode 6/12/10 . chapter 20
GRAFRAGRABA! THIS IS WHERE IT GETS GOOD AND IT STOPS? DAMMIT!
oh i am SO waiting for this...
i dunno...make his demon form like...anti-sora or something. with tails...and things that swirl. to make it look more epic.
| JKArcanus 6/12/10 . chapter 20
Good changes, and glad we're back to new content. Looking forward not only to the groups reaction to Kira but also her explainations for each of the genins natures ( and finding out how kakashis may have changed. Glad to see Naruto making progress on integrating his styles...look forward to being able to use the doujutsu longer as well as Kira fix to their cursed seals. Keep it up!
| kiyomos 6/12/10 . chapter 20
dude, you better update! I HAVE BEEN WAITING OR THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR SO LONG I FORGOT HOW LONG I HAVE BEEN WAITING! DUDE! SERIOUSLY! THIS CANNOT GO ON ANY LONGER! ok outburst of rightious fury over.
| Dusk Eclipse 6/12/10 . chapter 19
Love this story, I really like the way you give an explanation that makes sense, also your comedy abilities are top notch
this are my favorite gems from this chapter
"In an icy and…very intimidating voice…especially for a none shinobi she said, "Now…I very much appreciate what all of you are doing for my family but there are two things I do not allow in my house no matter how tasteful…" Naruto, Kira, and Kakashi all began to blanch, "NO PERVERSENESS OR PORN IN MY HOUSE!"
"when you two get back tonight we will have a long talk about proper reading material for children your age and modesty…especially you KI-RA-chan…" she finished all too sweetly.
They were doomed…"
Keep up the great work and thanks for returning to this great story.
| Leon Darksword 6/12/10 . chapter 20
I don't think you're allowed to complain about people not reviewing...you've got, at the time of my review, 1823 reviews. AFTER you took the story down and restarted. Anyway, liked the chapter, and looking forward to the never-before-seen chapters!