good fic
okay, i've only read fy mangas 7 and 8, but i'm reminded of tamahome's family that suboshi killed
is that them?
write more

hmmmmmmm.... that was pretty neat....... will you be writing more fanfics????????

GOD How I LOVe this story! My poor poor Shun-chan though... ::sniff::

there's a SEQUEL??? POST POST POST I MUST HEAR MORE =) gweat story

Ahhhh! Scary! Though is that in his mind, or in the afterlife? Whoa.

I absolutely LOVE this story. I read it such a long time ago on your webpage and lost the link, bah. This is such a wonderfully thought out Suboshi story. The concept is startling and you've written it well. This is definately going into my favorites. :)

I loved this!I read this before on a website please put the sequil to it up! I loved that to and I'm sure that all the oher twins fan would be pleased to read it! please keep writing you're really good!

Kami I never read somehting like that one but I have to say stroke of genuis.

Woah...thats all I can say, creepy but extreamly good.

That was very cool. I love the way that Yuiren takes the doll and rips it to make it look like her.

Oi... That was amazing...

trippy. poor subby-chan. i wouldnt mind him takin care of me. tho thats irrelevant. good story :-D veddy veddy trippy

Poor Suboshi... I read this story four times now and I still love it as much as always, though it is a bit desturbing, I don't mind. Whenever I feel like giving up on a story, I read this and everything is fine again. Keep up your good work, ne?