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Reviews for: You May Now Kiss the Bride
Billy Rose
2009-01-19 . chapter 1
very cute fic, especially the bit with the dress up
I bet they were very cute playing like that ^_^
great fic
Bobbyjohn
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
whoa love the story the pairing your awesome keep it up
DanielAC
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
This story is so cute! ^^ It's interesting because it's a little more innocent than most of your incest stories. You could almost see it as not REALLY being incest (but it is of course). It seems pretty realistic since a lot of siblings/cousins will fool around in a similar "innocent" way without really realizing the implications of what they're doing, in real life. Although they have more an idea of it when they're older at the end of this story, but it's still believable, and not like "LOL LET'S ** FOR NO REASON" like some incest stories can be. Again, you get the character's personalities down really well. The description is also pretty good. I like the little details like Blossom studying on the floor, and the strawberry ice cream. Aww how cute. I also really like the last line. It's just so cute. YAY LESBIAN INCEST 8D
Hairy Gregory
2007-07-27 . chapter 1
Aw, how sweet! :D

Good job with the first person narrative here - it was easy to see that Buttercup had never been kissed, let alone gone any further with anybody, from the way she described their actions while snogging on the couch.

I really love your PPG yuri incest stories, and I hope you continue to write them. :) Also, have you ever thought about doing a 3way story between all three PPG, or 2 of them and Robyn maybe, just for a slightly different take on a "pairing"? :D
charisma
2007-07-27 . chapter 1
face it no one can resist bubbles cute girlish charm not even buttercup and that program about spoiled rich teens was not my super sweet sixteen was it? or just some random program where teens do nothing but make out hm
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