love it and had a good laugth

really enjoyed the last 2 chapters.

I am truly enjoying the story so far, we will have to see where it goes.

HAHA. Fantastic story. I loved every moment of it. Great job! I'm still laughing. You're a very talented writer... still laughing.

very cute story, a lot of fun. :D

A very fun read , I liked it a lot . Daniel just has to give in when such a beautiful woman is so hopelessly attracted to him .

Loved it! LOL security cameras

Great idea - trap him into a date by having him unravel a puzzle! The brain is the way to get to his heart! Bad boy Daniel for leading Vala on without completing the mission. Paybacks a bitch!

Thanks so much for writing. Can't wait to read more of yours!

CindyLou

Nice wrap up. Cute story. Glad Daniel learned his lesson.

Very funny chapters, love how scared Daniel got over Vala being kidnapped. Thought that clueless Mitchell was funny too.

*“They’re called security cameras,” the General added* and loved Mitchell's seamonkey quip! Good job.

**“What worked! Your tongue!” Vala interrupted Daniel before he could retort. She jumped on him and began kissing him madly** ye ha! Great story!

great story.

lol really, really good...love the "security cameras" thing. well done

:D sam

Poor Mitchell, the last to know, and now he's getting graded on his observational skills.

Landry knowing via the security cameras made the ending even better.

Hope to see more fics from you.