This is great! I loved it. Their characters were great and it was brilliantly written.

great story

Very, very well done. Not earth-shattering or plot-heavy, just real. Impressed am I.

I always love your stories, and this one is no exception. Beautiful!
ME

I love your stories! This is no exception...great job!

AW! this is so sweet...you should continue it! this is the way it should have been between them...die, c/7, die! excellent writing.

Great story. I too was expecting Voyager to end this way - with some subtle indication that Janeway and Chakotay would have a future together. The writers sure had a bad day when they invented C/7! No easy task to turn this scene from Endgame into J/C, but you pulled it off :) Well done.

*aws*

Beautifully done, very sweet and true to the characters. I love your stories :)

That was great! So sweet!! And the way it SHOULD have gone!!
Thanks for writing!!
Nikki

Another gorgeous story, Mizvoy. (Sigh). So true to character that we can hope this is the way it really ended, with Janeway and Chakotay holding hands - and Seven out of the picture.

Thanks for sharing.

Mary S.

Aww, very nice! You did well at capturing Chakotay's voice. Everything down to the mindless tedium of Starfleet beauacracy was perfect. It could have been taken up from the cutting-room floor. Nice add-on

Heartfelt...I can imagine that it would have happened that way had the episode gone a few minutes longer. Great job!

Wonderful little story, Mizvoy. But I would like to know what happens next ; ) but that would be greedy.

Nice ending, and a very fitting one on top of that.

LOL, beautiful. Seems like both J&C are in denial about C7 (which is as it should be).