*claps* Very nice story! I really liked it; humor and all! :D

That was bloody great!

Espers, arrows, and Quickenings? Oi, what a battle! :D

Course, I nearly died laughing over Jules' response to Basch, yet, I love how things worked out, as always, for Balthier and Fran, being the romantics that they are...

... until next time, as Vaan fears! XD

(Props for ending it off with the lyrics!!

XD

What an ending. Vaan is precious.

And I love your battle scenes -- they're made of win.

Awesome! Update quickly!! You're story is humorous and yet not OOC.. I'm so glad i decided to read it.. Rock on..

Now, I'm most definitely hyped up for dual reasons:

1- You've updated! :D (and are to tie up loose ends?)

2- The climactic circumstance of Fran saving Balthier's arse (like old times XD) by going insane unto a gold/man-eating wyrm shall be written!

And, you made Jules a good guy... In addition to pulling off excellent reactions to Fran's sudden appearance. :)

Best writing yet! And certainly the best cliffhanger yet!

GAH. What a thanksgiving feast!

Nice work.

I like this story! Good work! I'll be awaiting the next chapter ^_^

At mention of the Wyrm aftermath, I very nearly fell off the chair laughing... ;)

Now, I wonder what Larsa's planning to get Vaan and Penelo into?

OKAY.. I need more... GAH


I am echanted, there is no nearly enough Balthier Fran fiction out there!!

Please keep writing.

That's hilarious. Fran always has to save the leading man's sexy **.

I loved characters telling stories, so I really enjoyed this chapter.

*waits for more like a lil puppy* please hurry! *puppy eyes* please.

oh and: "Balthier stared around at the room that looked as if it had been turned nearly upside down three times. The sky pirate was nowhere to be seen."

Isn't Basch looking for Balthier?

XD Damn you and your cliffhangers.

Nice work, the writing here was really top-notch, and Larsa is portrayed lovely here.

Only one thing: When Basch goes to check Balthier's room, he says "Damn in." I think it's "Damn it."

Ktjn and Jules... what interesting consultants! :)

heheheh, Balthier has to work with Jules. I like this story :)