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| serenity wayne 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseplease make this a usagi/heero pairing i really love it even thought i have never watched gundam wing in my life i love this crossovers so please update |
| Wild Horsefeathers8753 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is interesting so far, and your writing is very good. |
| PriestessHelene 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseLove this chapter 2 the description of the scence and dream sequence very nice. |
| Usagi Uchiha Yuy Kudo 2008-03-20 ch 4, | abusecan u plz have it usa/hee...plz?! u absoulutly luv that paring...really soft spot for it. lol anyway, update soon! i rly hope its usa/hee, it'll make myday! xDD update soon, i luv it, rly interesting, and its progressing really smoothly too, awesome! update and take care! |
| ShadowSonic1 2008-03-19 ch 4, | abuseFrom the looks of it, I think we now know where the huge crystal palace came from, or at least there was already a foundation there for them to build upon. I wonder what it was Luna saw that especially made her angry? So, everyone goes to school there and lots of civilians live there too since their homes are gone. You're being very realistic over this and it's refreshing. I'm guessing the three people at the end are either Setsuna, Haruka and Michiru or Heero, Trowa and Wufei. Well, while the Senshi are all willing to fight it out against ESUN (with what? Just themselves against all the Preventors or are they going to try and raise an army?) I'm guessing Usagi and Relena will be much more willing to talk it out. |
| serenity wayne 2008-03-18 ch 4, | abusecool story i llike your writing style but is it really going to be extremely long, because i don't like really long stories, if it has more than 50 chapters than i probably won't read it all sorrie but anyways its kawaii |
| ShadowSonic1 2008-03-18 ch 3, | abuseSeeing how I didn't bother reviewing a few days ago when you first posted this chapter I feel a little bad and wanted to make up for it with a review now. This is shaping up to be more mature than most GW/SM fics because you are starting to address the greater picture of merging the two universe: GW ended with Relena as part of the new world government yet we know Usagi is destined to rule Earth. So how does it go from one to the other? I can understand the Senshi being upset at the Cinq Kingdom re-establishing itself in Japan, yet you'd think they'd have a bit more appreciation in Relena for helping to take down the tyranny of the Alliance and OZ, and then be there to pick up the pieces without taking over for herself. I mean sure they have saved Earth but they have powers, Relena is just a human and she's accomplished quite a bit (though it was always with the help of Noin, Zechs or the pilots). |
| FilmMaker 2008-03-18 ch 4, | abuseI like that we already know the some of what the conflict is.I also like their reaction.It's diffently going to be an interesting story none the less.You also describe thing very well.I can tell your a stickler for detail.Which is great,because that makes the reader feel and see everything the characters feel.I await the next chapter sitting on the edge of my seat. |
| serenity wayne 2008-03-14 ch 3, | abusei like it but its sad |
| Tsuki no Echo 2008-03-12 ch 3, | abuseI love this fic. You should a new side...not really a new side but a side that most people don't portray of the senshi. Usagi who's always so cheerful does have a rare mature and solemn side that in my oppinion makes her look beautiful. A tragic beauty. The girls are often too seen as cheerful and carefree, nagging and teasing Usagi but they have a mature side that shows how deeply they care for Usagi and want her to stay cheerful and carefree. I like how you had Usagi kinda look up to Relena while most make her seem stupid and annoying. That's not what I saw when I watched Gundam Wing. Very interesting how you have her re-establishing the Sanq Kingdom in Tokyo when Usagi's reign isn't all that far off. I love it! I can't wait till you update this one. Good luck! |
| Usagi Uchiha Yuy Kudo 2008-01-03 ch 2, | abusethis is so freaky...but what does this hafta do with GW? or Hee-chan? xDD jks. update soon! it;s pretty cool. ^-^ update and take care! Happy holidays |
| FilmMaker 2007-09-06 ch 2, | abuseThe first version of this was good.But this one is better.it leaves you wanting more.I really want to know what's going next.Awesome job by the way.Great chap. |
| ShadowSonic1 2007-09-06 ch 2, | abuseWell, this is building towards something and I think it's going to be something we all will be satisfied with. I'm looking forward to reading more. Your spelling, sentence structure, grammar skills, etc are all excellent so the story is easy on the eyes as well so this isn't one of those gems that's hard to read. Very good. |
| MoonBunny777 2007-08-28 ch 2, | abuseWow! I really like this story! Glad you updated it! Cant wait for more! |
| seijin 2007-08-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is off to a great start. The veil of mystery makes me very curious as to how you would write this story. Keep up the great work! |