This is frakkin fantastic! I cant believe i haven't read this fic before! Well i wanted to review because i hope you continue this fic and write more because i'd love too see this turn into a serialised fic with more chapters! Excellent writing and i love Kara, she's exactly how i pictured her to be :-)

very cute. i enjoyed all of these. you're a great writer.

Oh, I love it! I haven't had much time to enjoy fics properly lately, but my summer Smallville withdrawal has officially set in. I love how you're using upcoming events, weaving them in with ease. I hope you continue this one for a while! :)

AW how sweet update!

I loved the "Lois Feeling" bits. Very sweet. I really like Smallville, I just hate that they seem to think that Lois and Clark would have so many other love interests while knowing each other. I wish they would just let them get involved instead of introducing a new "Editor" and the like.

I guess that's why we have fan fiction. Right?

Thanks for the great read!

Rhea

that was really, really good! you should continue it!

too bad this was only a one-shot. the clois fluff was great, without being too fluffy and the personalities of the clark and lois was pretty much dead-on. great job!

Delightful. :)

Aww, Clois fluff. Well done! This really feels like something straight out of Smallville! You have a few grammatical and spelling errors, but the writing is good and the characterization consistent.

that was really good

very good but i wish there was a chapter 2

Hey, i get to review first! yay! I can't believe no one has reviewed yet!

I really love the way you write! Love the story! Do you think there'll be a sequel? Please?

Nora