 BICaRdiBrEeZa 2007-09-07 . chapter 3This is frakkin fantastic! I cant believe i haven't read this fic before! Well i wanted to review because i hope you continue this fic and write more because i'd love too see this turn into a serialised fic with more chapters! Excellent writing and i love Kara, she's exactly how i pictured her to be :-) |
 lois mars 2007-08-03 . chapter 3 very cute. i enjoyed all of these. you're a great writer. |
 MadDogLane 2007-08-02 . chapter 3Oh, I love it!! I haven't had much time to enjoy fics properly lately, but my summer Smallville withdrawal has officially set in. I love how you're using upcoming events, weaving them in with ease. I hope you continue this one for a while! :) |
 Callista Wolfwood 2007-08-02 . chapter 3AW how sweet update! |
 Rhea Jediknight 2007-07-31 . chapter 1I loved the "Lois Feeling" bits. Very sweet. I really like Smallville, I just hate that they seem to think that Lois and Clark would have so many other love interests while knowing each other. I wish they would just let them get involved instead of introducing a new "Editor" and the like.
I guess that's why we have fan fiction. Right?
Thanks for the great read!
Rhea |
 MaddyHannah 2007-07-29 . chapter 1 that was really, really good!! you should continue it! |
 Asianchik24 2007-07-28 . chapter 1too bad this was only a one-shot. the clois fluff was great, without being too fluffy and the personalities of the clark and lois was pretty much dead-on. great job! |
 framework4 2007-07-28 . chapter 1Delightful. :) |
 DaggerPen 2007-07-27 . chapter 1Aww, Clois fluff. Well done! This really feels like something straight out of Smallville! You have a few grammatical and spelling errors, but the writing is good and the characterization consistent. |
 Callista Wolfwood 2007-07-27 . chapter 1that was really good |
 Jeremy Shane 2007-07-27 . chapter 1very good but i wish there was a chapter 2 |
 Nora 2007-07-27 . chapter 1 Hey, i get to review first! yay!! I can't believe no one has reviewed yet!
I really love the way you write! Love the story! Do you think there'll be a sequel? Please?
Nora |