thanx so much i love it :D i cant wait to read more when you post more :]

~Nayami

this is pretty good. altho...why do u have the url written out instead of just put there? (ive never tried putting a url into a story...soo...>.> lol)
really, this is good. i cant wait for more! ^-^

Great chapter! :D

Kitsune-chan *_*

Ah, nice to see into Naru's mind. :) Great start.

Kitsune-chan *_*

Nice chapter, a bit too short, so make the next one loner ;)

Hey, I thought I was your beta reader. I didn't correct this chapter yet. You could have at least told me you were going to post, even if you wanted to get it out before I read it.

its short but better than nothing so i like it :P i cant wait to read the next chapter when you post it (hopefully soon) :D thanx! and good luck on writing this without your notebook~! :]

"'Huh?' This girl is extremely wierd. Plus she is hyper and slapping my shoulder."

I cracked up and my dog gave me a funny look. Usually Naru's personality is really hard to write for, but you seem to be doing well so far. There are a couple of places where he would probably be a little more serious, but it doesn't really register because the rest is done well. No matter what, he'll always have millions of fangirls.

Me being one of them.

-Dreamer

This is awesome! I've always wanted to know Naru's point of view with out anyone mushing it up. Keep up the great writing!

Wow! this is really interesting with Naru's point of view. I can't wait to read more!

its pretty good so far please keep it up

i realy love how you've split up the chapies into how the anime splits it up (ie: file 3 # whatever)!

Anat and Phys is a pain, I had one semester of it and was sick of it (though we didn't have to learn all the bones and muscles, thank God). Hitch is a good movie. Nice chapter, though I'm finding myself going "Huh?" at some parts because I remember the anime more than the manga even though I usually enjoy manga more than anime I actually like them equally for this series. So great job, I'll be waiting for more :)

You probably didn't know this, but I didn't leave until after you posted this. You could have tried to contact me or something. Well, I'll just send you a PM with the mistakes I found (yes, I did find mistakes, but that's kinda my job as your beta reader). I'll talk to you later.

thanx :D and please update more chapters soon i cant wait to read them xD