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| takarifan01 2008-09-30 ch 16,  | abuseAhh, I'm excited to find out what happens next! :D Great chapter! I loved it. |
| DarthRoden aka Carl 2008-09-29 ch 16, | abuseGreetings SilveryMoons! So far so good Arnold, don't screw this up! I love this story please keep the chapters coming! Great job again SilveryMoons! The Force Is Strong With You! ~DarthRoden (aka Carl) |
| Nikki Narcissist 2008-09-29 ch 16, | abuseLOVELOVELOVE YAY |
| Lotusnapper 2008-09-29 ch 16, | abuseVery sweet! :) |
| Sal13 2008-09-28 ch 16, | abuseYaay! you finally updated , great chapter (= . Can't wait for the next one ! |
| Katelynn 2008-09-27 ch 16, anon. | abuseI am really enjoying your story, and can't wait for some closure. At the moment, I haven't seemed to find any errors in need of correction - Keep up the good writing! |
| otakualways 2008-09-27 ch 16, | abuselove grandpa they always hinted that lol please update soon |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-09-27 ch 16, | abuseNeat chapter. It seems Arnold and Helga are finally doing some serious progress. If replying please do it via e-mail. Thanks. Keep the good writing. |
| nikole stella 2008-09-12 ch 15, | abuseUgh! Helga was right! He is a coward! Gr! Oh Arnold. *sigh* At least it's realistic. I mean, I wouldn't come out and say "I love you." to some who bullied me for years. I hope this ends well! ...or maybe not. I'm not sure yet. Your story just makes me want EVERYTHING to happen... and I'm not sure what everything means. Sorry for blabbing. I just really like this story. |
| Kisstriss 2008-09-10 ch 15, | abuseOMG this was so exciting, cant wait to see more, I dont know have I said it, but you are a fantastic writer:D |
| Katelynn 2008-09-05 ch 15, anon. | abuseHow much more heartbreak can Helga take?! Seriously, I adore the use of cliffhangers here, and I'm excited to read the next installment. I think there are several ways to go at this, the tow most obvious being: a tragedy or huge change occurs, and forces Arnold to re-evaluate his feelings for Helga; or he remians dense and the two have to move on. Although ultimately it's up to you, the author. Other than that I didn't really find any errors - keep up the good work! |
| AnimatedBritney 2008-09-04 ch 15, | abuseWow...Real smooth Arnold *rolls eyes*. Better luck next time. |
| Amanda 2008-09-01 ch 15, anon. | abuseAh. I want another chapter damnit. HXA is so clique, but I can't help loving them. I love how your chapters are so crisp and short. A quick easy read, not confusing. Adorable. You write so cleanly. Seriously. love. |
| gloominati 2008-08-29 ch 15, | abuseAww, poor Helga! Arnold always was a little dense about other people's feelings, even though he means well. I like how you're dragging the story out. I hope you have a happy ending planned after all this delicious angst, though...just my personal preference. :) I look forward to reading more! |
| animeaddict2323232 2008-08-28 ch 15, | abuseThat was cute. You had me going there. I thought he was finally going to confess. But NO!Why does everyone always say it was in the heat of the moment? It was an awesome line. I love it! Plze continue. |