I thought this was very well written. I never really thought about it that way... interesting. This is going on my favourites, nice job.

That was perfect! Sad, but sweet.

Very sweet and sad. Severus Snape is one of my favorite characters and I was so happy that he turned out good. I love how you wrote his thoughts while he was dying, especially the part, "As he exhaled his final breath, he conceded to the fact that some things were just meant to be, and he silently thanked the fates that he had known Lily Evans -- for she had saved him. And that was meant to be." Awesome.
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Great job!That sounds just like what he was thinking at that time.I still wish he did't die though.

Short and sweet. It reinforces that Snape did not die in vain.
Thanks for sharing.
(Still, I am sad that he had to die.)