 heartstar 2/10/10 . chapter 1 Wow that was intersting. i liked it |
 shortnsweet057 9/6/05 . chapter 1Koodos to all who contributed to the story!
I enjoyed reading it. I'd like to read more with Elanie and George's friendship. |
 Evfrosyne 8/1/05 . chapter 1w00t! interesting, I'd like to see this continued... |
 Protectress of the Small 2/13/05 . chapter 1omg omg omg! i want more! u better update! well anyway i really like it.. i g2g now.. great job! bye |
 Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 1This is good, but its kinda hard to read, maybe you could space it out better, and spread the chapters out, but its a good idea
Kristina |
 Lily Skylo 6/1/03 . chapter 1Hello, :)
that's a neat story, the whole elaine fred hemione thing. It's neat, great job on it, and i say that to everyone else who wrote it too! ;P
-Lily Skylo |
 Ayla Pascal 1/16/02 . chapter 1Interesting... it's in a horrible font though. You might want to change that.
Your writing style is very good.
Ayla Pascal
Come read a Founders fic! /authorlinks/Ayla_Pascal/Salazars_Betrayal/ |