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| Confusedknight 2008-06-01 ch 2, | abuseThis was the best Danny and Flack friendship fic I've ever read! I thought that you wrote their characters perfectly, and it was great how it spanned 6 years of friendship. -smiles- this is one for my favourites list! |
| Lerrinus 2008-01-13 ch 2, | abuseLove this story! You got both boys down perfectly! I really liked the up-in-a-tree part and the dialogue was just spot on! Great work all around! *adds to faves* :-) |
| spacemonkey766 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseomg. this is one of my most favorite stories i've ever read...in any of my fandoms. i heard the characters in the dialogue you wrote. you just captured them perfectly. and the story...beautiful. i love the boys friendship and you portrayed it amazingly. “Danny, you even think about not talking to me, and I’ll make sure that there’s a physical reason why you can’t talk.” best line. hands down. sounds like something you'd hear in the show. :) so yeah, i absolutley loved it. so much i think i might read it again. fantastic job |
| TheGummiBear 2007-08-31 ch 2, | abuseWow. That is... well, I'm not quite sure what it is but it's one hell of a good story and I love it very much. |
| Padfoot4ever 2007-08-14 ch 2, | abuseI loved it! This line reminded me so much of me: "It wasn’t that he was bad at school. It was just that biology was more like chemistry, chemistry was verging on physics, physics was definitely math… and math had letters in it. And lets be honest, Flack’s spelling wasn’t brilliant at the best of time." I laughed out loud cuz I suck at spelling and math! Lovely story! Keep up the great work! :) |
| kitsune 2007-08-13 ch 2, anon. | abusethis was really cute! |
| crank 2007-08-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseAhh! awesome story. Very few authors really get the whole Danny and Flack friendship, but you seem to understand it perfectly. The show always shows how Flack is there for Danny, and it was interesting to see how Danny is also there to help Flack out when he needs it. They were both very in-character. I totally loved it! Very glad to see someone who shares the view that platonic relationships are just as important (if not more) as romantic ones. Great work. |
| super em 2007-08-01 ch 2, | abusegreat story! i love the danny-flack friendship and i think u wrote it perfectly :) |
| Sue Falkenkralle 2007-07-30 ch 2, | abuseHi, I like your writing style and I think you pictured both their relationship and their characters really good. I especialy liked the end. Hope you think about continueing this. Only minor mistake is that it's said in the show that Danny is there longer than Aiden. Other than this, you did a good job describing everything whisch happend in the last Seasons from their poin of view. Ciao Sue |
| sparkyCSI 2007-07-29 ch 2, | abuseIt's nice to be surprised, sometimes. I really like Flack losing control. It shows that he's human and with everything he went through between the end of the 2nd season and last season, he needs to lose control! I did finally get your email and I replied back to you. I wonder what the problem was! Anywho, I've been good. Been going out to fight night a lot. :D I'll have to fill you in on that later. Great chapter. I love friendship fics. :D |
| sparkyCSI 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseSo, how did I miss this? Seriously, FF hates me! I'm going to put you on my author alert list again. Anyway, since I didn't get to beta this...you did good. Not any major mistakes that I can find!! Now I'm just waiting on part two. :D How've ya been? |
| LaneIA 2007-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat beginning. I've always enjoyed the idea of Flack and Danny being good friends away from the job and you've done a nice job of capturing that idea. Nice work, hope to see an update soon. Lane |
| Forest Angel 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI think this is really good. I loved the bit about them waking up in the tree! |
| junior051 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abusei am one very happy reader at the moment. that is all thanks to you. thankyou! cannot wait for the next chapter. may not be slash but it is still danny and flack |
| Volonta forte 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abuse*whistles* how can you manage two fics at once?! You're a God! lol I like this! it's so brotherly! You really captured their freindship right without making it sound er...gay. and the stuck in a tree part, i bet you got that from Dumbo, right? lol. (I'm stuck watching Disney cartoons with Stella) this so rocks! |