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| Sgnutman 2008-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseYo guys, I don't wanna be mean, but I have to say that I'm amazed that nobody has seen this fic is kinda an adaptation of the Legacy of Kain- Blood Omen video game plot (a nice one, I must say), but in Naruto's style. Again, I think this one is a very nice adaptation, but I felt I had to say this. Sorry if I make someone mad, I just want the truth to be known, and tell kronosblade to keep the good work. |
| HellRift 2008-02-25 ch 5, | abuselove the story so far hope to catch up with everyone.i loved the prologue. cant wait to read more of this tomorrow! |
| templar132 2008-02-12 ch 18, | abuseOh, i was mentioned! :3 Yknow, if you want to get rid of the occasional typos that seem to plague your writing, you could go get yourself a beta reader to help. |
| tennisdesi91 2008-02-10 ch 18, | abusegreat chapter! .. can't wait for the next chapter ... haha .. post soon! |
| Gnosismaster 2008-02-10 ch 18, | abuseGreat chapter. Keep it up. |
| templar132 2008-01-22 ch 17, | abuseSame title, different word order xD |
| MiKe2vIcIoUs 2008-01-21 ch 17, | abuse"Way too fucking fast speed!" That was really funny. Good stuff, and the grammer and stuff was pretty much on point. Great job, you're pretty good at writing filler stuff lol |
| Gnosismaster 2008-01-20 ch 17, | abuseGreat chapter. I like it. |
| Ashes2theWind 2008-01-10 ch 16, | abusethis story is by far one of my favorites in fact it truely ties for first place with a fewothers. the story is just so fantastic and amaizng and wonderful you have an amazing imagination and you have create done of the most beatiful and creative and wonderful wordld i have ever read of. you are an amazing writer and this story is absolutly beautiful im so happy sakura is alive! and that her and naruto are together and even happier that sakura had been trainign under Tsunade so a question for you is can Sakura heal now? your amaizng and so is your story keep up the amazing work and please update soon |
| Starlight - Wild Koneko 2008-01-09 ch 16, | abuseYES! oh I loved it, she's alive! I knew she was *laughs* anyways, looking forward to lots lots more. |
| Gnosismaster 2008-01-09 ch 16, | abuseGreat chapter. I'm glad that she's back. |
| MiKe2vIcIoUs 2008-01-09 ch 16, | abusePhew... I feel so much better now that Sakura is alive... still/again. I like the chapter, but it needs ALOT of editing. Alot of it was small mistakes, and some of it was spelling. I don't know if it's on purpose, but it's Tsunade and shishou (instead of Tsunada and shisho) It's not too huge of a problem if they were there a little bit, but they were adding up. I still absolutely love this story, but you should think about getting an editor. If need be, I could fill that position for you. Great job, and I'm looking forward to your next chapter! |
| MiKe2vIcIoUs 2007-12-18 ch 15, | abuseAw wow, you just teased the hell out of me! Twice in one chapter, I thought it was Sakura! *mumble grumble* |
| katarean 2007-12-17 ch 15, | abusehi!! I liked this chapter.. I really hope Sakura is not really dead, thanks for updating!! Waiting for next chapter!! ^_^ |
| MiKe2vIcIoUs 2007-12-17 ch 14, | abuseWow. This world, this story is absolutely amazing. You are a truly, a very talented writer. Right now, I must stop, but I will definitely continue from here later. This is absolutely amazing. The only thing bad I could say is that it does require a bit of editing, but other than that, it is excellent. Wonderful job. Truly amazing. But Sakura died... *tear* |