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lion123
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
wickedly good
helloheart
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
It's really cool how you managed to throw in the Omashu legend! I never thought about these two that way. I've always adored this ship; you just managed to make me love it tenfold. ♥ An amazing one-shot!

And psht, I loved the cute background Zutara. (:
Kaori
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
Oh my God. You've made me ship this. Wow. Wow a thousand times over. This was so brilliantly written, so well done - I started noticing the 'love is brightest in the dark' when they were meeting at night! Definitely bookmarking this. And I lovelovelove the Zutara written in. :)
Thyryam
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
WOAH that was a really good Sokka/Azula fic. Awesome! You're a great writer at that super-deep-feeling-connection type of thing.
anonymous
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
This was extremely well written and you've portrayed the characters very well. The ending was kinda unexpected to me but it did justice to the story and I loved it.
ActionFry
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
Wow, my first time reading an awesome Sokkla fic. It was truly amazing, so sad... thy way you incorporated Oma and Shu was AWESOME. Loved it! :)
kanna
2008-09-05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I've always had a soft spot for Sokka and Azula, but incorporating Oma and Shu into their relationship so flawlessly? Especially when Oma and Shu's story is often seen as Zutara, rather than Sokkla! Genius, sheer genius.

Azula's voice here is very human, but not at all OOC. This is VERY hard to achieve. Hell, YOU deserve a medal for doing just that! (Well, you did win an award over at dotMoon's UFCawards. That should count for something!)

... Still can't get over this fic. It's reduced me to a puddle of incoherency. Oh, woe! D:
Ppleater
2008-08-16 . chapter 1
I... I never thought I would even think about this pairing. But mixing it with Oma and Shu? Utter brilliance. O_O
PearlPoetess
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
so awesome.
its true.

yeah: you can have the medal back.
i think it belongs to you for writing this amazing fic.
andies101
2008-06-12 . chapter 1
hey, great story! your literacy skills are insane. i love th sokkla pairing and i think you should do more! the only thing i was dissapionted in was that they never kissed or truly embraced. are you not a fan of love/romantic scenes? loved the reference to oma and shu, and when i read there was character death i instantly thought you might go with a "romeo+juilet" theme.
but stil im not complaining, it was fantastic 9.5/10 for sure
keep up the awesome work
Ogro
2008-05-16 . chapter 1
Wow! I've never found a very good SokkaAzula story before... this is actually my first one... but now, I really, really like this pairing. I've always sort of liked it a little bit, because I really like Good!Azula, but now, it's one of my favorite pairings, I think... In my own story, Azula is paired with Jet, but I think I like SoZula better now. Hmm... do you know any good AangZula stories I can read? I sorta like that pairing, too...

I love the twist on the Oma/Shu story! Usually, that only applies to Zuko and Katara, but you made it so refreshingly different and unique and so sad. It reminds me of Sokka losing his first love, Yue. Poor Sokka. He really isn't lucky with women, is he?

Greaat story!!
Bluetiger
2008-04-24 . chapter 1
Brilliant...

Combining the story of Oma and Shu, with Azula and Sokka was truly inspired, it helped to solve the central problem of Sokkla, by giving Azula a credible reason for not killing, wounding or otherwise subduing Sokka, when they first meet.

I was really sucked in by the quality of the writing, and my only complaint would be that its not longer (although now that I think about it, that might have diluted the awesomeness just a little). :)
Avatarone3
2008-03-26 . chapter 1
Really good! How did you think of the Oma and Shu dream to go along with it? Very good story!
-avatarone3
Airling42
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
Hey. From your author's notes, it didn't sound like you liked this story very much--but I thought it was great. It was a really original idea, and an original pairing. I'm actually a fan of Sokka/Azula, but there's hardly any fiction out there for it, and even less that's readable, let alone good.

So, thanks much for a lovely reading experience. I really enjoyed this, and it was very well-written. Much love!
~Besides the Point
zutaralives
2008-02-20 . chapter 1
oh my gods, i have never seen/met anyone who has urges to kill characters off like i do! i have this thing where my fingers are temporarily taken over by evil little bugger aliens and they make me write horrible stuff! i hate killing characters! i think Katara is the easiest to kill off, personally. she just WANTS to be killed, the way i (the evil little bugger aliens)see it. i've killed her, what, five times? once i figure out how to upload stuff, i can refer to it. but since i haven't yet... oh well.
i seriously fell in love with your fic, Bits and Pieces. i was almost in tears by the time it ended! you gave the characters such depth, and i could really FEEL the hurt they were experiencing, particularly Azula. POR baby! wow. first you turn my Taang, and now you make me pity Azula. miracles must really b possible. after reading As It Should Be, which i commented on also, i was like OMG, that's who Toph should totally be with, because until then i was torn between Sokka and Aang.but Aang needs her more, seeing how Katara's obviously going to end up with Zuko.
heh heh. that was long, huh? sorry.
keep spreading the love a la Taang Zutara!
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