wow, you're certainly a very skilled author^^ i've never really read anything on Parvati before, seeing as although she's often around, she doesn't exactly feature heavily in the books, but i thoroughly enjoyed this. you captured the characters perfectly (especially Parvati) and i could easily believe everything that happened. a favourite if ever i've seen one^^

This is absolutely lovely on so many levels. The character development and the relationship between Parvati and Padma is wonderfully depicted.

Thank you so much for sharing!

~Kat

loved it

This was SO well written!! I loved your interpretations! The best Patil fan fiction I've read yet

Great. I like how you developed her character, the end was great as well

i really liked this. I think it's brilliant how you've portrayed parvati, and i like how it started out and everything.
i'm really glad i read it, thanks :)

Wonderful story. So Parvati thinks that Ron is "amazingly immature"? Ron is developmentally average, for a boy. Hermione, on the other hand, is developmentally immature: she has no social skills at all, but people tend to confuse precocity for maturity. She's just beginning to catch up with the other kids by the end of Book 7!

Harry seems unusually mature because of growing up surrounded by sick, dangerous people: that is, he's learned to pay attention and meet expectations as survival skills.

JKR has created a lot of characters that are no better than cardboard; Parvati and Lavender are fully defined by their boy-crazy, hair-clothes-makeup and Divination obsessions, just as Pansy and Draco are fully defined as spoiled, bigoted bullies. In book six it looked like JKR was going to turn Draco into an actual person, but I guess she changed her mind. My guess is we know nothing about Padma because she's not really a person; she's fully defined as Parvati's identical twin.

In this story you have made Parvati and Padma into real people. I find myself wanting to point out to Parvati that she has the same ability to be selfish and nasty that Pansy has, but Pansy's parents encourage her bad behavior and the Patils do exactly the opposite. Also, all survivors hate therapy, but it really helps. Unfortunately all therapists are not good at what they do: you have the right to ask for a better doctor.

very nice. I have a soft spot for parvati and it's great that you took a not so known character and developed her so well. keep wrting.

Just loved it. You've taken an under-used character and developed her wonderfully, giving her a depth rarely seen in fan fiction. Congratulations!

That was great. I love this. i liked young Draco and Young pansy. it was all so great. Nice, Addsed to my list.

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I LUV IT!
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Since when was Parvati a blue-blooded witch? And so Slytherin-connected? Are you Indian - I am.

It's very good actually - simply splendid.

Wow! What a fantastic imagining of the lives of the Patil twins.

That was excellent! Good Job!

to quote Padma, "wow." very good piece of writing. you created a very believable situation. i also really like what you did with Parvati's character - its always annoyed me that because she has some girly charecteristics she is automatically stupid. also, great dramatization of the twins. i'm not a twin, but my father was (his twin died at 15). i'm just expected to have twins. so, i could stort of relate to Padma and Parvati's twinship. wonderful story, I'm very impressed.