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csimesser1
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
that was great lvoed it
DannyMessersGirl324iLOVEhim
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
this is good...i almost hit the cycle once...i had evrything but the homer...good story i really liked it!
lovedreamergrl
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
I never knew baseball could be so sensual;)
Celia Stanton
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Okay, I just have to comment and tell you how much I loved this piece--and believe me, I want to hate it, 'cause I am a Red Sox fan who loathes the Yankees to obscene levels. :) But I love the playfulness--and sexiness--here. You captured them so beautifully, effortlessly and lyrically. A gorgeous job all the way around.
dustie-snark
2007-09-29 . chapter 1
*SO* good.
Leena7
2007-09-03 . chapter 1
the only part i don't get is what a cycle is. the rest was great.
CSIMel
2007-08-12 . chapter 1
Awesome job!
Even though I know very little about baseball (we don't play a lot of it in Australia) and had to google 'A-Rod', I still really enjoyed this fic.
Loved how Lindsay 'took a backseat to baseball'. Typical male :P
Great characterisation, loved the smuff.
Great job XD
LocoGreggo
2007-08-11 . chapter 1
Woa that was hot.
The Little Corinthian
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
See, this cements my theory: sports of all kind are a hell of a lot more fun when Danny's there. :0P Great job!
Mistryja
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
Loved it!! It was soo cute!

Jayna
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JennCorinthos
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
This was so great... Loved it... As I was reading this I was seeing everything played out... Amazing, Amazing writing...

JENNIFER
Chelliyah
2007-07-29 . chapter 1
wow, i love it huni!!
myeverything02
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
Coming back from vacation to this is not bad (ya know I love my DL and my Yankees, despite how crappy they are doing)! I missed you and your writing! Maybe now that your away from Dave you can write more, because God knows you are brilliant!

xox Ash

PS: Hope the move went smoothly and you are enjoying be back in PA again!
Shelbers
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
so this is why you were "forced" into "studying" pics of carmine. lol! lets face it, its never studying if its got something to do with him;) great fic! love the dating analogy going right along with a-rods play, and daring lindsay is always fun:)
HillHarperHOT
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
That was avery good story. I was dying laughing when Lindsay was talking about his ears.
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