 shrekyardigans 2009-02-20 . chapter 1Poor Vlad. I feel rather sorry for him. |
 TPcrazy 2008-07-17 . chapter 8That's alright, it was fun reading. :) |
 Emily 2007-09-23 . chapter 7 Very good story.update soon please.^^ |
 MutantLover09 2007-08-18 . chapter 7i totally hate it when kids start to cry at the grocery store. i know its not the parents fault but i always glare at them, i know i'm a bad person. anyway if only vlad had been more observant poor little tori i hope shes ok. if i might make one suggestion to the story please dont take this the wrong way. if you dont mind could you break the paragraphs into smaller ones 'cause its kinda hard to read when its a big giant thing. i'm not trying to be rude but if you could do that it would be a little easier to read. update soon |
 hermie-the-frog 2007-08-18 . chapter 7Stupid people glaring at Vlad about Tori crying. Taking care of babies is a hard thing to do, idiots. -_- Uh oh, spaghetti-o's, here comes the problems. (Giggles.) Update soon please! |
 It's Yu!!! 2007-08-17 . chapter 6 Awesome chapter, honeybuns! You got the whole diaper changing experience perfect for Vlad! Tee hee hee!! He's all big bad Vlad Masters facing his worst foe yet...Tori's bowel movements! This was a wonderful continuation. I honestly cannot wait for the story to continue! I am all anticipation!! Love ya girl! |
 Luiz4200 2007-08-17 . chapter 6Funny chapter. Please keep writing. |
 MutantLover09 2007-08-16 . chapter 6Ha-ha that was hilarious, 'does anybody know how to change a diaper'. LOL. i liked it how all the other men gathered around him that was so funny. i'm glad that in this story Vlad is like not evil you know! please update soon i cant wait to see vlad when he has to potty train tori! |
 hermie-the-frog 2007-08-16 . chapter 6ROFL! Nice... |
 hermie-the-frog 2007-08-11 . chapter 4Oh...nobody wanted wittle Tori? Ouch...and she doesn't like Jack either. Pity...they could've made a nice couple. (Laughs evily.) |
 hermie-the-frog 2007-08-11 . chapter 3Aw...so cute! Probably my favorite chapter so far. (Giggles.) So...is Tori just named Tori or is Tori short for Victoria? Because it could be either. (Shrugs.) I'm getting off topic. |
 hermie-the-frog 2007-08-11 . chapter 2Okay...my only question is why the Fentons didn't want Jazz and Danny to live with Vlad too. Unless that was a wish thing...again, good descriptions. (Reads more.) |
 hermie-the-frog 2007-08-11 . chapter 1Hey Tori! Guess who it is. (It's a really hard guess. :P) I'm going to review more later, but I must say, I'm impressed with all the descriptions. Very nice job. (Goes off to read more.) |
 It's me, Yu!!! 2007-08-10 . chapter 5 EK!! Tori-Chan, I freaking love this so much. I'm still just all sorts of amazed at your writing skillz. |
 Luiz4200 2007-08-09 . chapter 4This is so exciting. Please update it soon. |