|Reviews for The Fine Line|
| hatakearan 10/7/07 . chapter 3
these people and their slyness. hah.
| ledfan 10/1/07 . chapter 3
aww good drable. poor Kiba he must be to sad to say anything... that or the mutt has an affair of his ow no way he doesn't smell Naruto all over her all the time xP
| RyanRendan 9/30/07 . chapter 3
That was real good but I was kinda hoping Kiba would have seen it to give the story a real angsty kick.
| vnvanman 9/30/07 . chapter 3
If Hinata never truly love Kiba, why did she marry him in the first place? Never lie to yourself, cause it hurts even more when you finally accept the truth. What the heart wants, the heart gets.
| DreamNin 9/17/07 . chapter 2
Ok because kakasaku is my favorite pairing of all time and itasasu is my second, i'd have to say i love this one more but only by a little and only for the aforementioned reasons. great job though.
| DreamNin 9/17/07 . chapter 1
aww... i don't know why i didn't read this earlier but now that i have i must review! that was adorably incestuous and because of that and the fact that it was between Itachi (awesome) and sasuke (more awesome) i loved it. strange yaoi sexual proclivities be damned, that was awesomeness.
| OI 9/5/07 . chapter 2
wow. this was awesome. i love how you show kakashi as needing something like this, this badly.
| ShipperTrish 8/30/07 . chapter 2
Wow. This was very hot and once again, very well written. Great job! )
| 3.31.09 8/28/07 . chapter 1
... it will never happen and thats all i have to say.
| loverofallthingschocolate 8/26/07 . chapter 2
That was really good! 16-dun dun dun! Well, I'm off to work on CTL, but my work load has put me off, it will probably be up by tomorrow.
| RyanRendan 8/26/07 . chapter 2
That was really good. The song fit it but ended before the story. :( I'm so happy you have plans for Temptations!
| RyanRendan 8/26/07 . chapter 1
that was... different, but still nice to read.
| cakecake 8/9/07 . chapter 1
Honestly that was a really bold first attempt at both yaoi and incest, no less... ! But you pulled it off really nicely I really liked how you describe Sasuke's need and craving for what he is receiving from Itachi... great job! Thank you for writing -
| valkyrja21 7/28/07 . chapter 1
Oh, this was very well written! Impressive.
| Zenon102 7/28/07 . chapter 1