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Reviews For: Domino Effect

Miharu-tenshi
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abusewhoa..good..perfect. eh, no..if roxas is there too, then it's perfect..XD now i won't have to worry if axel is in total darkness or what so ever.. :D
FrozenCellophane
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseOhh, that was pretty. =) Just very, very pretty. ^^

I apologize for my lack of coherency today, but, er, let me tell you I liked it. =D
ShadowAili
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuse*hearts* I could never let you starve, lovely! He. Thus I say - awesome sauce, nice drabble. ^^ And hooray for Axel and Zexion ending up friends~

~Aili
MeowMeowKy
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseAww, that made me smile. ^_^
I love the idea of the Organization chillin' on a beach.

Just a couple little errors I found, mostly just towards the end.
"then fallowed its length up to its owner." You misspelled "followed."

...And there was another grammar issue or something after that, but I can't find it again...

But yes. That was sweet, and I enjoyed it.
Mr. Shishio
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet. It gives the Organization a better sense of closure. And just... B'aw...

Seriously, when I find words, I'll let you know.
Suzaka
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseYou know I think I like this ending much better than the game, with the nobodies finding their own place. The way Saix was weakening Axel works beautifully with the way Axel died (because like a couple of dusks could really give him that much trouble. Yaright, Squeenix. Yeah right). And that last line just makes me go smile. Good job!
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