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| Miharu-tenshi 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abusewhoa..good..perfect. eh, no..if roxas is there too, then it's perfect..XD now i won't have to worry if axel is in total darkness or what so ever.. :D |
| FrozenCellophane 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseOhh, that was pretty. =) Just very, very pretty. ^^ I apologize for my lack of coherency today, but, er, let me tell you I liked it. =D |
| ShadowAili 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuse*hearts* I could never let you starve, lovely! He. Thus I say - awesome sauce, nice drabble. ^^ And hooray for Axel and Zexion ending up friends~ ~Aili |
| MeowMeowKy 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseAww, that made me smile. ^_^ I love the idea of the Organization chillin' on a beach. Just a couple little errors I found, mostly just towards the end. "then fallowed its length up to its owner." You misspelled "followed." ...And there was another grammar issue or something after that, but I can't find it again... But yes. That was sweet, and I enjoyed it. |
| Mr. Shishio 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet. It gives the Organization a better sense of closure. And just... B'aw... Seriously, when I find words, I'll let you know. |
| Suzaka 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseYou know I think I like this ending much better than the game, with the nobodies finding their own place. The way Saix was weakening Axel works beautifully with the way Axel died (because like a couple of dusks could really give him that much trouble. Yaright, Squeenix. Yeah right). And that last line just makes me go smile. Good job! |