Nice... I was cracking up during Sirius' lines. I like your Sirius.

Aw never thot that woud be ther 1st meet, more of a prank ware potter suddenly falls in love, but ur way was much better

Aww, so cute. And perfect for that particular song. I liked how it was set in the more-or-less muggle part of the world.

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alice x

that was so sweet

aw this story was so cute lol. he was in love with her even before hogwarts lol. although sirius and james did seem a little too obsessed with girls at such a young age but i loved the story anyways lol

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omg.. it was so sweet! The young soon-to-be- couple!.. Good story..

vampireprincess1606

That was really funny, and really sweet too! I really liked it!