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| yellow 14 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. Jules fear of upseting her parents is very similar to Jess's. Keep writing |
| Billy Rose 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseheh, great fic ^_^ I was suprised myself that Jules didn't turn out to be gay 'twas mind boggling *shrugs* but anyway, liked this a lot ^_^ |
| Mobilicorpus 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOoh, this was great, apart from the slightly distracting typo "out lowed" rather than "out loud". It's in the last paragraph. On the other hand, "fingers gripping porcelain until they ache" was a lovely phrase-it gives a wonderfully vivid impression of Jules' state of mind. Anyway, I thorougly enjoyed reading this, it was a lovely confirmation of the chemistry and tension between the two characters. Here's an interesting fact for you: The homoerotic overtones were probably deliberate, as the plan was originally for Jules and Jess to end up together in the film. Really. |
| FlameOfIllumination 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseYes! I also saw the blatant homoeroticism in this movie and I though Jules and Jess had far more chemistry than Jess and Joe or even Jules and Joe. Write something else, sometyhing longer, please. I'll review every chapter. |