hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha that was amazing loved it poor Bee

I liked it

XD this is a hilaroius story. It was really well written. Poor Bumblebee though, those Ambulances are nasty aren't they? (excluding Ratchet of course).

LOL!"If I ever run over you I promise to notice you" nice.

Till all are one

Meteor Prime

Poor Bee

Aw.w.w, POor 'Bee! At least he is in good hands: Ratchet is a bit cranky, but a good doctor. Can I Hug him?

Great ONeshot, but... o.o what happened to that naughty ambulance? n.n

TAKE CARE!

MISAO-CG

cute story.

really funny on bumblebee's part,

but all was amazing.

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this was cool...first fanfic? seriously? wow...this makes my 10th fanfic look REALLY sucky...

*reaches out to pat Bumblebee, but remembers his pain* I feel for you Bee. I'm small too... It's not fair...

Poor poor Bumblebee. I love the ending...so funny!

As a fellow author I found your writing style very flowing and although the spelling needs some work, I see it as very promising.

You're best oddball,

Tristan Johnson

A SPEEDBUMP! ::breaks out laughing::

LOL . . . Poor Bumblebee! Great job, write more! _

great!i love it,rachet!plezzzz write more!yum yum!i am hungry for more!

He he he! Awwwww, that was very cute. I'm a real sucker for original character stories. Write some more. :) Oh, and just FYI: Volkswagons have their engines in the rear. The trunk is in the front. These are TFs, however, so who knows? ;)