freaky goo but freaky

Very very nicely written. It was chilling, and so perfect. Hades is the God of the underworld- he's dark. And Persephone, so beautiful, so cold, so alive, but so dead.

A praise-worthy poetry written in the style of a prose!

Bravo!

Brilliant. Pure genius. I love it! Your writing is fantastic! :D *adds to Favorites* You rock!

-Forever

This is chilling and very well-done.

I loved the description you used. I also thought that this was wonderfully done.

Awesome! Well written and perfectly described; I also liked the gothic touch to the story.

That was very eloquent. Great job. )

This is a very unique story, you have done very nicely!