 Estrelita Farr 2008-02-20 . chapter 1*blinks* Hey, this looks familiar... did I actually read this without reviewing and without realising it was yours?! GAH!! *runs around madly*
Ahem. With my craziness aside, let's head on to the review!
This is a great piece of writing, as usual. The emotions were well-described - a feeling of gloom hung over the atmosphere around the monolith, then a feeling of relief and happiness towards the end. The characters were acting... well, in-character. Luna was being a little... strange, as usual, and the friendship between the trio was well shown through their action and speeches.
Storyline-wise, it's a bit short, but I wouldn't have it other way. It's a bit sad, knowing that so many people died (the aftermath of the... uh, seven-year war with Voldemort), yet a big relief towards the end, knowing that it's all over.
Though I'm beginning to feel like I'm sounding like a broken record. O_o
~Signed,
Estrelita Farr
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