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periwinkle27
2008-10-26 . chapter 3
Okay... great chapter! And what an impromptu! Loved it! But.. no time to waste, off to read the next one! Too curious to keep reviewing. And that's your fault!!
periwinkle27
2008-10-26 . chapter 2
Aw... you kept Dobby.. and the colors... And I bet Hermione does look breathtaking in her robes! I'm still confused about the slave, Army thing - at first I thought you'd left Dark win the war and this is post-war, but now... I'm just confused!
But I do get that you mixed a whole lot of cannon with a new scenery and a whole lot more cliff-hangers and I LOVE IT!!
periwinkle27
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
okay, reviewing here!
So, the story starts with Harry being led by a woman ( I think it's Ginny but don't ask me why!) to meet a couple ( his parents, maybe?). Okay, so far so good, I keep reading... the location changes... Draco giving a speech... boys talking, Harry walks by... WHOA! Rewind! Harry?? What the...? Okay, I'll keep reading, after all, I already know you like to wind us up. So, Ron's still Harry's best friend, that's something I recognize.. And then you do it again! Snape is the dark arts teacher?? Why do they need a Dark Arts teacher?.. And yet again... Ginny is dead?? But, but... you love Ginny!! Okay, I need to read the next chapter NOW!!
sparkleofmagic
2008-02-29 . chapter 3
More,more, more! It was really good!
staggered incite
2008-02-09 . chapter 3
right. patience is a virtue...and shall be rewarded? you write extremely well and i really am enjoying your story- though i am curious as to exactly what height canon harry is. i think i'll look it up.
staggered incite
2008-02-09 . chapter 1
excellent. right up my alley. thanks for the read.
The13thDoctor
2008-01-06 . chapter 3
nice AU. It will be interesting to see where this leads.
hg-always
2007-12-31 . chapter 3
Please update soon! Does Harry know his last name? Is he still famous, or what? I can't wait to read more!

Molly
joebobs sister
2007-12-22 . chapter 3
UPDATE!
Loyd1989
2007-12-09 . chapter 3
Wow! I can't wait to find out why there are people in 2 different places and Ron thinks Ginny is dead.

This is extremely interesting and suspenseful.

Can't wait to read more.
PenguinOfTroy
2007-12-03 . chapter 3
this is great, please update soon, I can't wait for more :)
karma11
2007-12-02 . chapter 3
awesome! oh please update soon!~
Juliette Fox
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
I loved the chapter, I can't wait for the next one! And please make the next update sooner.
Jimmy D
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
Interesting chapter. The only thing weird I am slightly lost about which will probably be answered in the next chapter is where is Harry now? It says he is flying but I don't think that he can fly that fast to another place. Love the little song part in it. Nice to see you updating though. Can't wait for next chapter. Take Care!
KAG
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
You have a great story so far. You definitely have me interested! I can't wait to read what happens next please update soon!
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