wow! that was great. and speaking of great... go to google and look up Angel Boy Art Incorporated...
Angel Boy Art Incorporated is a nonprofit private foundation dedicated to exploring the myriad of ways art can benefit special needs children and their families.

Angel Boy Art Incorporated has three main goals: To help children with special differences flourish, communicate and express themselves through art; To raise money for special needs children and their families by selling their art; and To raise public awareness about special needs children and break down the stigma that a handicapped child cannot communicate.

cool...i like how you wrote this...it seems i may just have to watch this sence again to figure out if this really happened...

I think that this was a very good story. I really liked how you showed a story between two characters that we didn't get to now much about in the movie.

This was very interesting, and have some very vivid character studies, particularly in the middle. It feels a bit long towards the end, and there are one or two typos, but other than that this was very fine.