Very nice little story. So Bagman. And the first time for a while I've enjoyed stream of consciousness. It's usually misemployed, but it's perfect here.

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Another really creepy one! I don't think I've ever seen a fic about either Bagman or Karkaroff before. Very original.

Bloody brilliant! Almost makes me feel bad for both of the poor saps. [Almost. ;-)] I really liked Bagman's pronoun trouble. "He's dead. I'm dead, I mean." And he had just the right amount of hale-and-hearty bluffness, even when he's totally freaking out. Really quite good.

i love that last line. great job!

Great! This is really awesome! Good job!

Wow. Really powerful.

Really good!