nice story xD
i wonder what is gonna happend...
anyways i wanna ask somethings... its kinda confusing...
why dosent bella have that burning in her throat?
&the wedding is kinda rush, its almost immediately after her change..
hmm... that's all update soon x]

``aileen~

i like the story, but i think that you have to make it clearer about wh's talking/thinking and when (a.k.a. flashback...)it's a great story! update soon please!

Yeah right! If you don't update again soo, I'll kill you with something much wiorse than lions!

so i think you should have more bella and edward stuff!
thanks for saying who was talking!

Okay so 50% of the time i was confused i did not know who was talking and you kept changing what was going a ton so it was hard to keep up
i say for the rest of the story say who is speaking and go in to more deatel.
i love the stoty
UPDATE SOON!

YOU ARE AN EVIL PERWSON! I HOPE YOUR HEART ROTS!
Okay so not really but that is just plain cruel! You do not make Bella and Edward mad on thei honeymoon! You are an evil maniacle rotten, horrible, fiendish, annoying, frustrating person!
I shun you!
And now I am done shunning so update your stzory before i personally force you to by tying you to your chair in front of your computer and force you to type! UPDATE!

keep going

that was... short. so dawn fainted to nick and bella, actually i can understand that. ha, edward totally deserved what he got at the end. ;) don't kill your zabby

Enjoyed it.

PLOT TWIST!

Oh!

Cuteness

WAH! Wait how's that gonna work?

^_^ Tis okay, you're forgiven.

MWHAHA! That was adorable!