Interesting take on the whole idea of Yuna needing to choose one of them. Going in a different direction then most by having her pick Lulu and giving good reason as to why she isn't picking the more cliche choices.

So for that I applaud this piece... there's really only two things that bothered me slightly. First being Auron's description, now it was pretty good and had a nice power to it... but the part about all his years makes no sense to me. I mean he's 35... I'm pretty sure Cid from FF7 was about that old... and it's not like your falling apart at that age. So that whole thing is a little shaky to me.

The second thing, much with most of what I've read by you... is though the description is overflowing with imagery, I find it to be a bit much... almost trying to hard to make a piece seem deep and artistic. Not saying it's a bad thing, I just find it awkward and it takes away from the story a little.

But hell, I'd be lying if I said you were a bad writer... so good job I respect things when they aren't cookie cutter and uninspired.

A very amazing piece, though it makes me think of Yuna in a greater light, for she can't bear to use Tidus or Rikku, because she doesn't want to become like Yunalesca...

Very good, very haunting...

I'm an Auron fan, and seeing your depiction of him losing all hope at the end, how he falls to his knees at the end...

Very powerful...