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sarcastic 'n' silly 2008-01-04 ch 2,	abusehey, Love the story. Actually love all the stories. My favorite character is Venus. My favorite couple is Venus with Kunzite. Can it be a wonder why I am absolutely crazy over you and what you write.While my favorite character is Venus I don't really like it when she is written as a complete idiotic ditz. While I understand she is somewhat ditzy and kooky that is okay, but she is also the leader of the senshi. That has to mean she has a very hard strenghth as well as the ability to lead; and that an idiot does not make. That is probably the reason I love these stories best; you make her a happy human without taking her power from her. Though my one peeve is how long it takes you to update your stories especially a few of my really big favorites ( which haven't been updated in so long I have forgotten the title.[ it was the one that you had written than stopped then started writing again but had left off at chapter 2. It was a favorite on this entire website and I have been imagining what's going to happen next] Though since I have forgotten I guess that is an excuse to reread, though hopefully something new soon!). I completely understand busy schedules and writer's block but as a fan I also understand complete frustration because you love so much! Keep on rockin' in the literary world! P.S. I love your little thought at the end about Aussies, Brits, Americans, and CAnadians. I complete agree with all of them. Since I'm Canadian and think Canada got the best rap according to what I read. Go Canada!
MelsT 2007-11-27 ch 2,	abuseHeyo again. Another excellent chapter. I can really feel the weight of Mina's character, especially her fight and flight reactions. I also like how you mentioned she doesn't like sympathy. People seem to overlook Mina and her many damaging qualities, so I'm glad you've really captured them here. I also like your portrayal of Raye. Spot on. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
ashley-chan 2007-11-24 ch 2, anon.	abusewow. see ya at the next chapp
raye85 2007-11-18 ch 2,	abusewell i musr say that, i really do feel so bad for mal.i wish i could be there to comfort him.lol j/k. well as for him, i wonder is up to him. and for the other girls, are they dating someone even though they have nothing to do with the story. well for mina, i would of choosen love also, and believed everything she was told. as for for her feelings i could tell exactly what she was feeling. love the datail and also all the emotion you put into it. i could read it and feel that i am them. cant wait to read more of it.
micati 2007-11-18 ch 2,	abuseNo! You have to make a sequel to this!! It can't end like this! They're my favourite ShittennouSenshi couple! Please say it's not over? Please?
alizep 2007-11-18 ch 2,	abuseI'm glad you finally updated! I look forward to the two of them working things out - I'm a sucker for happy endings. Hopefully you can update soon...
Goddess Usagi 2007-11-18 ch 2,	abuseOh, please tell me you're not leaving it there. Your characterisation of Mina and Mal was so perfect, I couldn't handle not getting another chapter! laughs But its fair enough leaving it there too. You're a brilliant writer Venus Smurf, and I can't wait to read more of whatever you write. Good luck :) -- Usa
Loverofallthingsshiny 2007-09-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI just finished checking out your story on fictionpress, and I loved it so much that i had to come and read your other stuff. this was totally different than i was expecting, but i loved it. you're a powerful writer, and i can't wait to read your other stuff!
alizep 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuseI like your story and I hope that you plan on updating again soon!
minamine 2007-08-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseReally great story and very funny quotes. I love you!
sharpasatack 2007-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. This was amazing! I love the way you write. Give us the rest soon, please!
raye85 2007-07-31 ch 1,	abusewow, i must admit the story is very good, when i read it somehow i though it was complete and was thinking to myse;f good ending, but i am glad that you are going to keep writting it. cant wait for the update and hopefully it had a good ending.
Laura819 2007-07-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was amazing! Really well written, really beautiful. So powerful, too! You've become my favorite author. Update soon!
Sassy-Chan 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou know, I knew you were writing this, but I still got way too excited when I saw that you'd posted a new story. Yes, I want you to finish some of the others, but that doesn't mean I don't love anything from you. Anyway, this was great! Beautifully written--everything you do is beautifully written, though. Your words are always just like poetry. Very smooth and beautiful. Lots of emotion in this, too. You did a great job with Mina's reactions, though I can't wait to find out more about what Malachite did and why she thought he was cheating. It'd be just like you not to go into it, but I hope you do. Please give us the next part soon! I just love you!
twilight dawn 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseI loved this chapter. It was so well written.

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