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| gpenn76 2007-08-27 ch 7, | abuseHORAY! Great story! |
| gpenn76 2007-08-23 ch 6, | abusemake more please! |
| cakedoughnutschickenboob 2007-08-16 ch 5, | abuseI like this a lot. Zelda is way too uptight. -CDCB (By the way could you maybe check out my new fic, Never to be Seen) |
| futures past115 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abusePretty good chapter. I like this story quite a bit. Might be interesting if you have Zelda have to go on an adventure, or get into a romance with another zora. does your righting program have any sort of spell check? well whatever. good chapter. keep writing! |
| futurespast112 2007-08-10 ch 2, anon. | abusejust an interesting idea, perhaps, zelda should start liking her new form, and in the end decide to, or want to keep it. Either way, great story. |
| HyruleCastleGatekeeper 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseHa ha, seems like an amusing story. It's always good to see some of these spoiled-brat princesses get what they deserve once in a while. One nitpick, a zora would have to do a lot more than simply drink pitchers of water to stay hydrated. The N64's Ocarina of Time booklet said that zoras can't even stay outside of water for too long. The King should exile her to the moat! -James |
| Waves Of Eternal Doom 2007-07-30 ch 2, | abuseInteresting so far. this should be entertaining for a while. I want to see Link and Ruto laugh at zelda |
| yes 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate update update update |