Varg is Swedish for murderer.

Most angsty warlike story there is on fanfiction. hope you consider writing your own book. sad that katashi died. i fell he is the most aweson jinchuuriki of them all. cant imagine myself in that much pain, cuting his tounge and mouth everytime he eats or talks or just close his mouth. Hmm love your story keep updating!

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First of all, I want to apologize - this is my first review to this story that I started around 1 pm today (and, after the interruption of work it's now 3 am). I'm sorry to not have reviewed the other chapters (yet!).

I will say that your story got me hooked on what would be yesterday afternoon. Now that it is the wee hours of the morning, I must say - you have a very addictive piece of writing.

This is the first time, in a long while, that I've enjoyed a piece of fanfiction so thoroughly. At the moment, I can't offer much criticism. One because my brain is dead and two, I can't really find much to criticize.

Usually I don't like other characters - or however you would term them; yours I love. The character's you've written are believable. I felt for Katashi. I was saddened, so very much by his death.

I love the quotes you use, though I rarely recognize them (the only one I picked up right away being the Watchmen quote). It gives the story a really good character (for lack of a better word).

Anyways, I'm sorry for rambling. It's nearing 4 am and I'm probably half asleep, heh. Words can't really explain how I feel. I just really wanted you to know how I felt about this story! It was that spellbinding. I just had to finish it tonight!

Thank you for the great story,

General Winter

awsome
update soon

They shouldn't lose everyone they care for.

Katashi is dead. Is Riko going to be next? What diease does she have again?

Will Gaara go mad with grief?

he never tried being a teacher to any of them except for Sasuke

So Yugito is sterile-that's cruel! Women who want children can't have them-what have they done to devesre that!?

*sigh*

I wonder if Katashi would get along with Kisame?

the pains of fighting-I wonder how Moriko will fight in the future?

Incredible. I honestly cannot think of words to describe how amazing I find this work. This story is a gem among trash - provocative, emotional, majestic and terribly, terribly tragic. I read this story, push through all of the heart-ache and the sorrow, because your characters are people I care about. I didn't read this far for the simple fact that I like Naruto (the character) and you've put a cool spin on him and his story - Kishimoto's creation can go burn itself. I read this because you've made me fall in love with your Naruto, with Katashi and Yugito and all the rest of this broken family of nine.

You've written one of the few, true masterpieces anywhere on this site and it's been a honor and a privilege to be able to read. You have a true talent - one with which time and effort could turn into a viable career in writing if you so desired. At the very least, you'd have one reader waiting to buy. Barring that, please update this as soon as you can. I can't wait to read what comes next and yet I dread it at the same time - hoping everything turns out well and knowing that it won't.

And it's that dichotomy between anticipation and dread that sings the highest praises I can offer.

Katashi! noo! T_T

*cries* you are such a cruel writer...wa~h...katashi died, why? Sorry...one of those moments ya' know? anyway i like the story and this is how it should be, a family understands no matter what and a home is where you keep your heart and know it's safe, the villages never understood that, but the jinchuuriki did.

Really nice chapter, you always get the emotions to the readers!

But it seems you´re also caught in this dreadful thing called real life (XD) , and I really hope you´ll get to update again and finish the story!