Damn you woman!

My entire family is now wondering why I am crying in front of a computer screen.

As if they didn't doubt my sanity enough...

This chapter made me cry

holy shit what the hell just happened there at the end? Was there a fight or something or what? Shinobu, haha, somebody's been reading Love Hina during this time of writing.

pretty damn sad. Reminds me of midevil torture or something ya know?

See confused even more so. He witnessed the deaths of Haku and Zabuza, so why the heck would he consider this the first death. Also, I could have sworn he had killed Gato. Very confused about certain things. Plus this ought to be funny, seeing Sasuke on the receiving end of Sasuke's annoyance.

Hmm, that was weird. Why would they go back to the Land of Fire. You would think that they wouldn't want to attract attention, especially attention that wants to get their hands on them very badly. This is starting to get confusing, really it is.

Wow, that's actually not so bad of a sad story. So he doesn't cut his mouth every time he tries and speak? Regardless, bullying for being good at wat you do is nothing special. Nothing wrong with that really. ANyway, nice chapter, though what really got me was the acadamy. Once again, you tugged at the strings on my heart. Good job indeed. Ja Ne.

wait a minute. Confusion galore here. If I'm not mistaken, doesn't Kirigakure hail Naruto as a hero even naming a bridge after him or something? Correct me if I'm wrong or anything, just a thought.

...whoa, this was the most saddest chapter of any story I have ever read. Especially when they met the mother. That story was simply terrible and not "bad writing" either. Far from it. You're agood angst writer. I didn't cry, but just felt immense pain. IF that were canon, I would hit Sasuke for thinking he was in emotional pain. So far, each chapter just gets better and better. Awesome job thus far bro, glad I am reading this. I am assuming that Sasuke and Naruto played role-reverse and now he's going to save Naruto (sorry random but it was on my mind). Excellent job thus far and hope you continue to please me. Ja Ne.

update you asshole

I'm as stoic a cynical bastard as they come, but the recent chapters hit pretty hard. Love the story, love the characterizations.

Please do continue though, I'm a little concerned since your author's notes make it sound like you used to update once a month or something, and the last update has been more than several months ago.

Jag gillar inte dina swarge "jag älskar dig"
ps. jag ar frröm finnland!

great chapter, but isonade should be AT LEAST seven times bigger than your description of 50 feet long

good chapter, but going above five tails could kill shinobu? Ridiculous.

wonderful story, hope ALL NINE jinchuuriki are there at the end, cause frankly, they deserve it. By the way, before, Isonade said he was running low on chakra, but even if he only has three tails and not nine, that's still more than enough chakra to destroy each of the five major villages and multiple lesser ones. please update soon