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Reviews For: Unprecedented

Chelliyah 2007-08-26 ch 1,	abusehehe aw that was so cute huni! i just love your fics... soo much! this was very cute, and i love how u wrote it.. not actually saying any names through most of the beginning! :D love it! X
RachelHeidi 2007-08-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was so freakin’ sweet and adorable and considering I work at a shop with a bunch of guys I’m having to suppress the chick noise, but that was cute! Really, REALLY cute.
The Little Corinthian 2007-08-16 ch 1,	abuseOh, so cute! I've been so bad about reading fic lately (this whole real life thing totally sucks), but Rachel Heidi told me she had just read these, so I had to check them out. So sweet! On to the next one! :0P
marialisa 2007-08-08 ch 1,	abuseOh how can I tell you how much I loved this? You had me thinking 'his girl' was Lindsay until she emerged from the lab - my delight at finding out 'his girl' was his daughter (Danielle - who named her I wonder giggle) was lovely. It was sweet, funny and the perfect thing to read before bed - I will go to sleep with a smile on my face :)
mustlovecat 2007-07-30 ch 1,	abuseAww, that was so lovely. I can just see Danny walking around the carnival with his kid :) Thanks for sharing. Suzanne
Anki 2007-07-30 ch 1,	abuseAww, that was so cute. Danny's probably wrapped around the pinky of both his girls. ;)
Elainhe 2007-07-30 ch 1,	abuseAnd this was perfect. You had me with the 'his girl'. I thought it was significant somehow, but I just couldn't figure out how. :) It was sweet and funny and special all at once - just what I needed this afternoon. And the writing, as we have come to expect from you, is just amazing. :D Loved this line (and all the teasing): "She craned her head back so she could give him that Where-did-you-come-up-with-that-lame-line look that he knew so well." A wonderful look at their relationship a few years on, whilst keeping them in character!
Quintessence of Darkness 2007-07-30 ch 1,	abuseAww that was so adorable! I love Danny and Lindsay Family fics, and this is such a sweet little moment. I love that you don't know who is who at the beginning and how you introduce the characters gradually, it is really lovely. O also love how Danielle gets her Daddy in bother for calling the sideshow people freaky ;) Great little oneshot!
Gaelen Kerr 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseA great piece SJ, even unbeta'd I could hardly spot anything save the 1 or 2 odd words. Well written and simply refreshing, wish I was there on the rides too, winter is really starting to get to me, no matter how much I love it. "a place that was gay and spinning during his grandparents’ day; slipping away as relics often do to dereliction and decay in his parents’ day; but had phoenixed to refurbishment and reverence within his own day." Great use of diction to describe the time that has passed from generation to generation, I can definately picture the stages through the seasons. "She craned her head back so she could give him that Where-did-you-come-up-with-that-lame-line look that he knew so well." My, I could definately see that look clearly. That one definately can't be missed! I think I just love all of Lindsay's looks fullstop. lol. The interaction between Danny, Linds and Danielle was great and in character. Now if only we could replace one of the writers with you. :) A pleasure to read SJ!
Leena7 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseaaw! That was so sweet i could taste the cotton candy.
audaciousblonde 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseI love how you repeat and emphasize 'his girl' without giving away who it is. It could be Lindsay, but then again... I love how you reveal it is actually Danielle and how Lindsay is so concerned about 'her size' when she and Danny are talking. I love these lines: '“Besides,” he grinned mischievously, gliding his hand over the perfect roundness of life incubating within her, “boys are just bigger.”' '“I don’t know if I can take two of the species known as male Messer; one is enough to drive me crazy at times.” She affectionately trailed a hand along his stubble.' A beautifully written family story with a touch of heartfelt interaction and real life truth. Well Done.
Ninde Ancalime 2007-07-28 ch 1,	abuseAw.. so at first I was thinking it was Lindsay... but instead it's mini-Lindsay! That was seriously adorable! I especially love that her name is Danielle... as in, a female Daniel. Lol. Lindsay could be a unisex name [I have a friend who's this big brawny football player and his name is Lindsay]... though I don't think Danny will ever agree to that. I loved it!
notesofwimsey 2007-07-28 ch 1,	abuseAw. I love the misdirection in the opening scene, and the utter sweetness of the final one. The humour was light and deft, and evey line could have been delivered by the characters without a hitch. Lovely job!

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