EEP! This piece was awesome (the title, the prompts, the writing) all of it was vivid, warm and lush. My favorite moments were "the moment was vast" and her dark skin against his.

Beautiful. Thank you.

This was really good. I liked the flow of the fic, the descriptions, and the settings. It was also a nice touch that you kept the dialogue to a minimum.

Very well done. I liked the way you jumped around in the timeline. It kept it interesting. Especially the history section.

that was really good. i cant think of any areas that it could improve in.

-has swooned and is naruto fangirl-

Haha, this is very nice :)

This was very well thought out, and it shows. You took a creative idea and turned it into something great. I like how you incorporated another character in the history section. It made the story more interesting.