Loved this one too! I love how you write the Obi/Ani relationship, it's very believable and sweet!

Wow! That was awesome! I wish I could write a fic that long and well thought out. Just great! I didn't even mind the violent parts at all, it flowed well with the rest of the story and really seemed in place. Nice smut too!

Loved the Anakin and Obi-Wan characterization and the contrast between the light-hearted and the violent. Extremely well done methinks.

Brilliant. Solid, thorough characterization without the angst factor, which can get tiresome after a while, and a good storyline.

I really liked the story... and I liked the way all the gory violence had a *point*. Better than just throwing it in for the heck of it.

I also really liked the interaction between Anakin & Obi-Wan. Really kept to their characters!

Excellent story! Well plotted and well executed. It is always good to see nicely written sex scenes that add to, but do not dominate the tale.I'm looking forward to your next effort with anticipation!

I loved it! Awsome writing, plot, and you captured Anakin and Obi-Wan's character well.

A very well-written story. I did not care for the pairing of Kettie and Obi-Wan much, but I think you captured the relationship between Master and Padawan wonderfully. Good job.

Wow! You never cease to amaze me.

I enjoyed the story, but didn't like the blood and gore being described, although I understood why it was in there.

"You young people with your hair, these days!" I loved that.

That was positively, absolutely, an awesome fanfic! I mean...that had everything: adventure, suspense, drama, romance, action...etc. I mean...WOW. I'm really, *really* impressed..almost beyond words. I think this fanfic is just wonderful. I loved it. The graphic detail was most thrilling and horrifying. You simply must write more. Congratulations on such a wonderful fanfic. I doubt I'll ever forget it. As a matter of fact, I think I'm going to read it again!

It's an pretty good story. It's well written, but I felt that the violence was a bit over done only because for as descriptive as that scene was, other scenes lacked such detail. And, this is opinion alone, I felt that your manner of violence had a rather cartoon feel to it. Whether or not that was your intention, I don't know. There was nice interaction between Anakin and Obi-Wan.

Excellent story! It's by far one of the best I've read. I have to admit that I felt a little woozy from all of the gore.. but it wasn't overdone.

Awesome story. Very well written. Nice lesson that Obi Wan teaches Anakin. Also, good love scene, shows that the jedi are human after all. Well done, definately worth reading.