OMGOMG! lol r u gong to continue this? LOVE IT!

this is adorable! but considering the fact that the last time you updated it was something 'bout a year ago, I don't believe it'll have its continuation...
oh well, it is still lovelly. I love this couple and I loved the way you showed their emotions. It's just beautiful! poor Uryuu. I love him to death!

if you come to update this someday, be sure I'll read it. ;)
bye bye.

Hey-yo, Ichigo was kind of a jerk in this, but not very OOC, so cool. It actually had a plot, that's usually too much to ask of a fanfiction nowadays, you know T_T. Anyway, zankeyoo and keep it up!

i love it! it's very IC! and you have nice grammar. i hate fics written in half-english.

and i like how it's not wordy. you're good at avoiding using too many linking verbs, but if i were you i would try to incorporate more direct action verbs. you tend to have a bit of dialogue then jump right into the next action. i do the same thing ALL the time, and i know for experience that the piece will become SO much better if you lengthen it out.

but it's really good! one of the best pieces i've read /literature/ wise on here.

This was great I liked it. I thought that Ichigo was going to be one of those guys who have sex once and then just leaves but you turned it around. It was a wonderful story with a great plot twist.

Whoop!! I love this story!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]

This pairing =

Wasn't this a doujinshi?
I read a doujinshi exactly like this.

omg, I ACCUALLY CRIED cuz of the drama...it was just so sad!

at first i thought it was sad but now i think it's starting to go to a happy ending (i hope)! this fic is very awesome and unique and i really hope you finish it! please keep up the good work and update ASAP!

best wishes from lil k

...i actually CRIED...
...i love the way you write...

Hoohoo, that was kind of short. :[ But IDC, I loved this fic. ^^

Nicely writen and generally beautiful story! Added you to watchlist on dA too! :D

OMG! i freakin love this fic xD
please write some more cause it's beging to be more intresting
than before xD

update when ya can xD

I like it! Por Uryuu! You are so cruel XD
Kisses from Argentina!