that story was very well written. it was sort of inspiring in a emo-ish kinda way, but it was still a great story. and the part about him being gay was a nice touch. )

Poor Dai . . . this was really powerfully written. I loved your insights into his personality, and his little hypothetical "good v. evil" situation was very true.

wow. that was deep...

Oh that was GOOD! I LOVED the last paragraph... So deep, so dramtic... So... Awesome... I think you should write some kind of sequel to this... Or simply write more angst... Anything involving Dai! I loved this... I really did! Keep It Up!

Wooohoooo! My thoughts on Daisuke exactly! Great job! I personally could never actually write about him cuz he's just too damn complicated! I commend you on your excellent work!

That was very well written. It's true, Ken *has* never insulted Daisuke. And when you get down to it, Iori really hasn't either. You can't help but to feel sorry for him. Stupid dubbers. I like this fic a lot. _ *Adds to favs*